How to write a captivating personal profile story?

Victoria Gibberson, an 18 years old telepathic girl who can read the mind of others whenever she wants. It was a curse more than a gift Her parents died in a car accident, one year back and thus, the first thing she did after completing high school was to change her place of residence. Moving in a small town called Pearly Canines with her aunt, she said goodbye to the old memories wanting to start fresh with her college studies. But there was something wrong with this place. The vibe she was getting was one of creep but luring her in at the same time. The thing that was most strange to her was, she felt an undeniable attraction to this guy called Alexander Hunter. He would stare at her deeply as if knowing her deepest secrets. It didn't help her when one night, he came near her and leaned before whispering seductively in her ears, "Hello, mate. Let's fall in love with each other."

A story about a guy who gets 3 wishes and reincarnates in Legend of Korra as an earthbender prodigy. I always wanted to write fanfiction and the idea for this story kept popping up in my head so here we are. My main goal right now is to upload a chapter at least once a week and that becomes a lot harder when English isn't my first language. Besides that please be gentle with me as actually posting this took a lot of courage for me. I own nothing besides the OC.

This author has something to say: You can’t actually delete novels in WN, but I will start deleting all the chapters. I’m sorry for all the readers that has supported this novel, but I’m going to do a major revision soon and will be also deleting my account here. Thank you for everything.

Synopsis.

Kaylee McCain's life takes a dramatic turn for the worse on the day of her graduation when her beloved grandmother passes away. She was left in the care of her cruel aunt and cousin, Aria, who treated her like a servant. Kaylee's dream of finding a job is crushed when her aunt forbids her from leaving the house. Trapped and alone, Kaylee thinks her life can't get any worse. But just when she's about to give up, she meets Christopher Jarvis, the powerful and domineering CEO of the Jarvis Empire. Despite his cold-hearted exterior, there's something about Christopher that draws Kaylee in. Will he be the one to rescue her from her miserable life, or will he only make things worse? Follow Kaylee's journey and find out if she can overcome her struggles. and find happiness. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED

WARNING my stories generally lack spirit i write for fun and to free my head from this particular plot. Expect inconsistency bullshit power ups and messed up logic and also don't expect good grammar.