How to Find the Tone in a Short Story?

WARNING my stories generally lack spirit i write for fun and to free my head from this particular plot. Expect inconsistency bullshit power ups and messed up logic and also don't expect good grammar.

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Constantly entangled in a never-ending cycle of reincarnation, Finn Adrian is determined to make it in a world that has been forged to go against his progress. Finn believes no one can be trusted. Dying a thousand times has impacted him strongly. A strong, cold-hearted, hateful at the same time calculated villain he turns out to be. Now blessed by the gods with a system that at first turns out to be a nightmare, *[You will now be reminded of your roots. Memories will be played while the host is asleep] “What?! Memories?" Finn stutters as the only memories he had and knew about were of him dying not once, not twice but a thousand times!!...* Eventually, things begin to look up for him. The system would become the only one he shared a connection with that didn't involve his dubious plans. *[Blood/Flesh ratio equilibrium has shifted beyond marked point] [Blood/Flesh > 70:30] [Consume flesh to maintain equilibrium!!] Now with the various powers that come with the system, Finn is determined to change his Fate by any means necessary. But along the way, he will meet obstacles that would pose an existential threat to him. What happens when the prey becomes the hunter? Because his main target isn't a target at all. His target is all!!! Check out my other work if it turns out you like this one. MY DEMON SYSTEM: IMMORTAL WARS A/N:- .The chapters are being updated continuously. I would appreciate your input so I could better the novel. ........... Note:- For mass release and bonus chapters:- 15 Golden Tickets= 1 bonus chapter. 150 power stones= 1 bonus chapter. 1 Magic Castle= 3 bonus chapters. Other than that, any gifts to the novel will have bonus releases to them. ... February (Valentines) Event:- Events are going on!!! So join the dicord and help the novel as much as possible with your contributions to earn the rewards I have set up for you all. The top 3 fans would be rewarded with coins while there will also be specially commissioned chapters and some spicy bonus chapters for all of you. More info on discord, so don't forget to join the discord community. Also, don't forget to vote for the novel with power stones and Golden tickets as this would increase your chances of winning by a lot. Have fun ;) Discord Channel Link:- https://discord.gg/yA7EV7cT Art cover : DC max

When a woman dies in the ocean with regret and hate, she becomes a siren to mesmerize men to sink their ships. When a woman dies in the snow in despair, she becomes a yuki-onna to freeze anyone who has the guts to look at her. When a raped woman dies with the desire for revenge in her heart, she becomes a succubus to suffer men and to be fed from them. This is my story; written for those who take the hard way instead of accepting death and rely on angels to bring justice. *Mature content *No underage character *No incest *No love, just lust

"Aku tidak akan meninggalkan mu." Aku janji pada adikku, tapi aku tidak menepatinya. Ketika seorang William Alexander, pria sempurna yang memiliki sebuah rahasia besar dimasa lalu, seorang anak adopsi yang meninggalkan adiknya untuk menggantikan posisi seorang pewaris kerajaan bisnis yang memiliki kebutuhan khusus. William harus menepati janjinya untuk setia dan menuruti apapun permintaan dari ayah angkatnya Jackson Alexander, pengusaha kaya yang ambisius dan berhati dingin agar Jackson mempertemukannya dengan adiknya kembali. Suatu ketika Jackson memintanya kembali ke negara asalnya, untuk menjadi seorang gubernur agar memudahkannya melakukan pembangunan real estate, untuk itu ia harus menikahi seorang wanita, Rose gadis berumur dua puluh tiga tahun, seorang superstar yang di cintai seluruh masyarakat yang ternyata adalah kekasih dari adik kandungnya sendiri yaitu Rayhan Adamson yang telah tumbuh menjadi seorang produser musik yang terkenal tanpa William ketahui, ia hanya ingin segera bertemu dengan adiknya seperti apa yang dijanjikan oleh Jackson jika ia berhasil menjadi seorang gubernur dan mendapatkan ijin pembangunan maka Jackson akan mempertemukannya dengan Rayhan adiknya. Akankah William akan dapat kembali bertemu dengan Rayhan, menebus dosanya yang telah meninggalkan Rayhan saat ia masih berusia tujuh tahun dan mendapatkan cintanya yang perlahan tumbuh tanpa disadarinya kepada Rose? *** hi, terimakasih karena sudah membaca novel buatan ku Aku akan sangat menghargai setiap review serta komen yang kalian berikan. Kalian bisa menghubungi ku di : lmarlina8889@gmail.com