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SSR-ranked killer Mu Hui died in an explosion, only waking up to find herself transmigrated into the body of a vicious female supporting character in a book. The original Host was as stupid as a pig. As the lover of the villain, she helped the male protagonist steal the important documents from the villain and backstabbed the villain for the male protagonist. The ending was, of course, being attacked by both the male protagonist and the villain, and, dying miserably. And the point where Mu Hui transmigrated was the moment when she stabbed the villain and ran to the male protagonist's side— What could she do to change her fate? Mu Hui made a prompt decision and placed the knife that had stabbed the villain onto the male protagonist's neck. "The scene just now was deliberately acted out by my man and me. Return the document to my man immediately!" The male protagonist: ""???"" The antagonist: ""???"" Later on, Mu Hui constantly helped the villain Fu Siye fight monsters and level up, just so that she could live longer and return to her original world. However, one day, after a bath, the villain came up to her. "You've been my lover for so long. When are you going to consummate your marriage?" Mu Hui: “???” This was not how it was written in the book! [Even if it is meant to be, it can be changed step by step.]

[The story will resume from 1st of March] [Currently under heavy Editing. I will be back sometime in the future once I am done with editing the starting chapters through and thorough. Sorry for the inconvenience. (No. of chapter Edited 0/100) Although the major errors are like in the first 30-40 chapters, I will still look a bit further for smoother reading experience. The errors are highlighted in a pinned review.] ........................... 'Every Mistake has a price' Visca, a playground for the 'Gods', is a world where 'Gods' nurture their champions to fight for them. Reincarnators, Transmigrator, Regressers, people with system and other cheat characters, all roam the world of Visca. Then, HE was brought into this world. And THAT, was the mistake the 'Gods' shouldn't have done. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: He reincarnates in a world that has its own laws and rules. A vast world where different species rule over different kingdoms. A world where magic decides your future. There is danger lurking everywhere. Thousands of secrets undiscovered. What happens when a genius among geniuses reincarnates into that world with only a pathetic amount of magic within him? What would happen to someone who only wanted to live a plain life with his wife and family? What was the reason for his reincarnation? and what will he do next? Find out as you follow a magical journey of myths and Legends, as threads of fate unravel themselves at the hands of the 'weakest' mage. ................................................................. [Chapter 1-18 is 0th ark. (A form of intro ark) It has many information dumps and there could be grammatical mistakes in them, so please bear with it. Chapter 19+ is the first ark. It is where the main story actually starts. Thank you for coming here] .................................................................. Other important points: •This isn't a weak to strong type of novel. Our protagonist is strong from the beginning. The story would revolve around him and his brothers along with the future allies and the choices they make as they explore the world. •The first 18 chapters will have a lot of foreshadowing, world-building and other explanations. It will cover at least half of the world area that you should expect to be explored in the future. •Also, you might feel like it started somewhere from the middle with so many things going on in the background and that's because it is so...Don't expect things to finally kick into motion after the MC appears... .................................................................. [I do not own the Cover and if the creator has any issues, please message me at deathscavenger97@gmail.com I'll credit or remove it]

A story about a guy who gets 3 wishes and reincarnates in Legend of Korra as an earthbender prodigy. I always wanted to write fanfiction and the idea for this story kept popping up in my head so here we are. My main goal right now is to upload a chapter at least once a week and that becomes a lot harder when English isn't my first language. Besides that please be gentle with me as actually posting this took a lot of courage for me. I own nothing besides the OC.

Synopsis.

Ang pagkawala ng lahat ng kanyang alaala ang naging dahilan ng pagbabago sa kanyang buhay. Hindi man ito sadya at lalong kailanman hindi n'ya ito inasahan. Subalit kailangang yakapin ni Angela ang kasalukuyan. Dahil dito na umiikot ngayon ang kanyang mundo. Simula ng magising siya bilang si Angeline Alquiza. Pero sino nga ba siya talaga? Hanggang kailan ba s'ya mananatili sa katauhan nito? Kung pwede nga lang sana gagawin n'ya ang lahat, h'wag lang mawala ang lahat ng ito sa kanya. Lalo na ang mga taong napamahal na nang husto sa kanya. Subalit alam n'yang ang lahat ay may hangganan. Pero paano kung patuloy siyang habulin ng kanyang nakaraan? May mga panaginip na patuloy na gumugulo sa kanyang isip, alam niya at ramdam niyang maaaring may kaugnayan sa nakaraan n'yang buhay. Hanggang sa makilala niya ang isang babaing sa una pa lamang misteryosa na ang naging dating nito sa kanya. Pero sino nga ba ang babaing ito? Na tila gusto pa yatang agawin ang lahat sa kanya, maging ang kanyang kaligayahan. Ang nakapagtataka pa tila ba may lihim itong galit sa kanya. Gayu'ng hindi naman n'ya ito kilala. Pero hindi nga ba niya ito kilala? Bakit unang narinig pa lang n'ya ang pangalan nito iba na ang pakiramdam n'ya. May nagawa ba s'yang pagkakamali sa babaing ito o sa kanyang nakaraan? Kaya ba walang naghahanap sa kanya. Dahil ba, isa s'yang masamang tao? Until one day she just found out that someone was suffering greatly because of her. After all that happened to her and after forgetting the past. Including the promise not being fulfilled. But how can she fulfill it? If she doesn't remember it, after all. * * * Author's Note: Ano man sa istoryang ito ang may pagkakahawig o pagkakatulad sa iba. Kagaya ng pangalan, karakter, lugar, mga salita man o mga pangyayari at iba pa ay hindi po sinasadya. Ang lahat ng nilalaman ng istoryang ito ay pawang kathang isip lamang. Bunga ng malikot na imahinasyon ng may akda. Hindi rin po ito maaaring gayahin ng sinuman ng walang pahintulot. Ito po ay orihinal na akda ng inyong lingkod. MARAMING SALAMAT!? _____ BY: MG GEMINI @LadyGem25

WARNING my stories generally lack spirit i write for fun and to free my head from this particular plot. Expect inconsistency bullshit power ups and messed up logic and also don't expect good grammar.