How to effectively critique short story writing?

Power, Power, Power. Everyone wants it. No one wants to lose it. It corrupts, It performs miracles. It causes untold devastation. Power, the aim of all madmen. The thing that allows them to enable their impetus. I want power, and with where I'm going, I'll need it to ensure my survival, after all there's much of it up for the taking. Ff.net account. https://www.fanfiction.net/u/12059332/Rain-Reid *For any of you who wish to support me my patreon link is down below. I won't be holding chapters hostage or any of that. The patreon is just there if you wish to support me because you enjoy my work. You are in no way obligated to provide me with anything. It's all your choice. https://www.patreon.com/ReidR41n I'll also be posting notices, teasers, polls and one-shot stories for more to come, so check it out. *Thanks and shout-out to LordValmar for the new cover image. It's sick bro!*

A wealth of varied sexual histories. The stories are unrelated. Support me in Patreon

Credit goes to Orginial Author-san, Anonwriting2021 One of the increasingly popular tropes of the doujinshi world has been the concept of netorare, or NTR. The genre involves the cuckolding of an individual in plots that go from the regrettably familiar to the outrageously misogynistic and misandristic. While the author recognizes that fetishes are generally a matter of "to each their own so long as it doesn't non-consensually hurt anyone," this collection of stories is meant to provide views on how those NTR plots might evolve if carried out to their natural conclusion.

Being transmigrated into an alien girl's body was not my ideal wish, but still, it is better than the alternatives. I don't own Mass Effect that belongs to BioWare

A collection of stories that work as alternative side stories asked by readers of my other works. The type of things that would never work in the regular story lines, but there are no rules when it comes to making it separate. Either way, people wanted some really inappropriate stuff. So content warning for pretty much anything. I'll put specific warnings at the start of the chapters. It'll also be based on stories that I've written on here and other sites. Maybe there might be concepts brought up by readers if people are vocal enough about what they want. It mostly just depends on how I feel about it. The story it's based on (If it is one) will also be noted at the start. It might sound like I'm trying to cover my bases here. But I'm not really into a lot of the things written here. If I was, then they'd probably just show up in their main stories instead. These are mostly ideas from readers that I think I could make interesting for them. Image Source: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/77488061