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This is a young man of twenty years who was reincarnated in High School DXD carrying with him a system to ascend beyond its limits. The first time I make a fan-fic note is that some characters will not be present. ----- The High School DXD does not belong to me, nor any character. English is not my language

Explore the story of a reborn woman who unleashes the Dark God and hilariously tries to tame him into her younger brother. A modern woman is transmigrated to a young girl's body in the world of magic. Due to the circumstances going out of her control, she releases the dark god who is only 11 years old boy with no memory? To keep herself alive, she has decided to make him love her as his older sister. With a spirit beast who likes to eat his problems and a seer who seeks her spirit beast, she traverses through realms while the dark god wonders how to get his heart back. ----------- Author's Note: It is not easy to tame a god. The story is supposed to be an easy read. Throw away logic while reading this. Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Romance/Comedy/NSFW/R+/Mature --------- Instagram: Koch_Norah Goodreads: www.goodreads.com/norah_koch ****Full list of my novels******* Novels with Interconnected Worlds: 1. The Love That Remains (Completed) 2. His Mischievous Time-Traveler: How to capture a celebrity husband? (Completed) 3. His Devious Harbinger: How To Tame A Wicked God? (Completed) 4. Supernatural Investigation 101: Chronicles of Nakashima Wakana  5. When A Ghoul Falls In Love 6. Hunting for a Husband in a Vampire Apocalypse Standalone Novels:  Her Wicked CEO: How To Seduce A Hikikomori Wife? Miss Chicken & Her Mister The Villainous Emperor is My Pet? (Available on Goodnovel.Com) Bad x Bad: My Dear Hana (Available on Goodnovel.Com) *** Cover credit: Photo by Shane Devlin on Unsplash

[The story will resume from 1st of March] [Currently under heavy Editing. I will be back sometime in the future once I am done with editing the starting chapters through and thorough. Sorry for the inconvenience. (No. of chapter Edited 0/100) Although the major errors are like in the first 30-40 chapters, I will still look a bit further for smoother reading experience. The errors are highlighted in a pinned review.] ........................... 'Every Mistake has a price' Visca, a playground for the 'Gods', is a world where 'Gods' nurture their champions to fight for them. Reincarnators, Transmigrator, Regressers, people with system and other cheat characters, all roam the world of Visca. Then, HE was brought into this world. And THAT, was the mistake the 'Gods' shouldn't have done. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Disclaimer: He reincarnates in a world that has its own laws and rules. A vast world where different species rule over different kingdoms. A world where magic decides your future. There is danger lurking everywhere. Thousands of secrets undiscovered. What happens when a genius among geniuses reincarnates into that world with only a pathetic amount of magic within him? What would happen to someone who only wanted to live a plain life with his wife and family? What was the reason for his reincarnation? and what will he do next? Find out as you follow a magical journey of myths and Legends, as threads of fate unravel themselves at the hands of the 'weakest' mage. ................................................................. [Chapter 1-18 is 0th ark. (A form of intro ark) It has many information dumps and there could be grammatical mistakes in them, so please bear with it. Chapter 19+ is the first ark. It is where the main story actually starts. Thank you for coming here] .................................................................. Other important points: •This isn't a weak to strong type of novel. Our protagonist is strong from the beginning. The story would revolve around him and his brothers along with the future allies and the choices they make as they explore the world. •The first 18 chapters will have a lot of foreshadowing, world-building and other explanations. It will cover at least half of the world area that you should expect to be explored in the future. •Also, you might feel like it started somewhere from the middle with so many things going on in the background and that's because it is so...Don't expect things to finally kick into motion after the MC appears... .................................................................. [I do not own the Cover and if the creator has any issues, please message me at deathscavenger97@gmail.com I'll credit or remove it]

A story about a guy who gets 3 wishes and reincarnates in Legend of Korra as an earthbender prodigy. I always wanted to write fanfiction and the idea for this story kept popping up in my head so here we are. My main goal right now is to upload a chapter at least once a week and that becomes a lot harder when English isn't my first language. Besides that please be gentle with me as actually posting this took a lot of courage for me. I own nothing besides the OC.

From being betrothed at the age of ten, betrayed by her lover, to seeing her brother dying in front of her eyes, Anna suffered everything at the age of thirteen! But at last, she chose to leave the underworld and live her life as a normal human being. Her heart's door is closed because of whatever happened in the past. On the other hand is Alex, famous for being the playboy of the school but unknown to all of them, he is deeply rooted in her past and her 'named' fiance. Who exactly is he!? No one has any idea about it, except being feared in the whole school. What happens when they both come together to fulfill her bucket list but end up falling for each other? Is this accepted by society? Is her love a hurdle on the way to her revenge for her brother’s death?! And most important, how will Anna react when she gets to know that Alex is not someone she knew all along? Let us read and know about what Anna faces in the line of Underworld and love when responsibility comes on her shoulders at an early age!? .... "Hey, what are you doing?" asked Anna as Alex's grip on her wrist was becoming more strong. "Listen An, no one else except me is allowed to touch you or see your shoulders." Coming closer to her ear, he whispered as his hot breeze lingered on her earlobe. "You are just MINE." The dominance was quite evident in his voice as her wide eyes stared on his face. "Get Lost." "Yes, Baby lets get lost in each other's world." Alex replied while he was simple looking at his love with adoration. Anna narrowed her eyes as she spoke, “You are just shameless!! How idiot of you!" A small smirk came on his face as his eyes showed the gentleness, "Only for you, Love." ............................ *Check Out my Another novel, * You can follow author on Social Media pages Instagram- Amaira_Knight Discord- Amaira_Knight#1314 PS- Novel cover isn't mine, its taken from Internet.

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