I think you could try to do some marketing and promotion to reach a wider audience. Also, consider rewriting and polishing parts that might have been weak.
Well, first, don't get too down on yourself. Maybe it's time to look at reader feedback and see what could be improved.
First, work on the characters. Make them more complex and give them real motives. Second, vary the scares. Don't just rely on jump scares. Third, improve the descriptions. Use more vivid language. For example, instead of saying 'it was a spooky forest', say 'the forest loomed, its gnarled trees reaching out like twisted arms, the mist swirling around them like lost souls'.
Not at all. Light novels cover a wide range of genres and styles. Some are really well-written and can be very enjoyable. It depends on your personal preferences and the specific titles you choose.
Before writing a fantasy novel, one usually had to first determine the background and worldview of the story, including the setting of the world, the setting of gods, monsters, magic, and other elements, as well as the history, culture, politics, and other backgrounds of the world. These settings needed to be clear and detailed so that the subsequent story could have a foundation. Next, he needed to consider the setting of the protagonist, including his personality, background, goals, and so on. A good protagonist could add life and interest to the story, making it easier for the readers to immerse themselves in the story. With the above two basic elements, you can start to conceive the story. Based on the protagonist's background and goals, a story framework with conflict and suspense was designed, including the beginning, middle, and end. At the same time, he needed to master the rhythm of the story and the development of the plot so that the readers could understand the plot and characters of the story step by step. Finally, he needed to write and revise the story to continuously improve and enhance the plot to create an attractive and infectious fantasy novel.
The most important thing in writing a fantasy novel was to determine the background and worldview of the story. This was the foundation of any novel. When constructing this worldview, it was necessary to consider various myths, legends, traditional cultures, and other elements and integrate them into the story so that the reader could feel the depth and breadth of this worldview. After confirming the world view, he could consider the storyline and character setting. Fantasy novels usually involved elements such as magic, mythology, and martial arts, so they needed to set a unique skill and background for the protagonist, as well as a group of characters with complex backgrounds and personalities. In addition, in order to make the novel more lively and interesting, some techniques such as suspense setting, conflict creation, character development, etc. needed to be considered. The suspense setting could make the readers curious and arouse the desire to read; the conflict creation could promote the development of the story through plot turns and character confrontations; the character development could shape the character and fate through different perspectives and experiences. Finally, writing is a process that requires constant revision and improvement. Therefore, it requires patience and perseverance to constantly think about and improve the storyline and character settings to create a truly excellent fantasy novel.
Try adding some unexpected plot twists or introducing new and exciting characters. That often spices things up.
It could be a story where Harry faces tough subjects or has a hard time understanding the teaching methods, resulting in him performing poorly at school. Also, there might be some personal issues affecting his concentration and academic performance.
Maybe it's a story where Harry is distracted by personal problems and can't focus on his studies, resulting in poor grades.
I think it might be because of cultural differences or the focus on other aspects of the story. Sometimes, the emphasis is more on action or fantasy rather than detailed relationship building.
I don't think it'll necessarily satisfy your needs, but I'll try my best to recommend a novel that's the most relevant to your description." When the cherry blossoms fall, a beautiful girl confesses her love." This book is a light novel written by the author Harusaki. It's a daily love novel. The general plot of this novel is as follows: The leaves rustled in the wind. The sunset was extremely gentle. The girl's skirt was raised. It stopped with the wind. … "... I've been thinking about a question. What is the form of love?" "... As philosophers, my predecessors have given many answers, such as dedication, self, and dependence, but none of them are correct for me…" Her reading stopped here, and the falling petals blocked the rest. He reached out and swept it away. [... gentle, cute, considerate, rich... and beautiful legs that are out of reach...] "... Everything that makes people feel happy..." "... So I came to the conclusion..." The words recorded on this page ended here. He raised his hand and flipped the page. Oh, So it was written in the click to read… ---------------------------- " Illustrated Guide to Tokyo Girlfriends " was a light novel by author Zhou Huang Hezi, a derivative doujinshi novel. The general plot of this novel was: I'll tell you the content directly. It's just a simple daily love story. It doesn't affect the reading even if you haven't read the original work. In the Form of Sound, he beat Ishida Shoya three times and taught Nishinomiya Glass how to speak. When he graduated, Ueno Naoka snatched away the second button. " I Want to Eat Your Pancreas." Sakura Ryo, from today onwards, you must train your body and eat food that protects your spleen. I will be responsible for solving any murderer! Your Name and Miwa swap bodies, delve into each other's lives, and finally meet in Tokyo " Ways to Cultivate a Passerby Female Lead " Kato Megumi: " Stop surrounding me. Why is it that I have such a high sense of existence just because I've made a movie?!" Spencer Yinglili,"Can An Yilun get lost too?" I won't be a loser this time!" Shika Kasumigaoka: " The person who made all the high school students in Tokyo come to see my work must know me very well." " There's Something Wrong with My Youthful Love Story " Under the Snow, can you please stop following me around all day? What kind of commission did Sakura give you? And Senior Yono, I really can't do it! ---------------------------- " My Love Choice Is A Little Difficult " was a light novel written by the author, Yuehua Liwen. It was a daily love novel. The general plot of this novel was as follows: He, who came from a parallel universe, had come to a country where cherry blossoms were flying. He originally wanted to immerse himself in a dull and long daily life. However, the game in his mind often gave him choices to make. The choice was unnecessary for a handsome man from Tokyo. Because the truly charismatic guys were always straightforward. For example, kissing her lips was more important than anything else. The evening glow dyed the window frame, and the night breeze mixed with a few cherry blossoms. The snow-white petals had a hint of pink as they fell on the girl's soft shoulders. "Are you really unable to make a choice?" The girl's eyes were slightly lowered, and her green hair was blown by the breeze. "I don't want to disappoint anyone." The young man slowly turned around, his eyes filled with clarity. ---------------------------- Cherry Blossom Rain in Love was a romantic youth-love novel written by Xue Yuyi. The general plot of the novel was: When they were young, they met during the cherry blossom season. After that, they left one after another for various reasons, but they had already decided that they would not marry anyone else in this life. However, one setback after another stopped them. Ten years later, would they still remember their childhood? ---------------------------- [Internet King] Summer of Sakura Skies was a light novel written by the author, Ming Yue Ye. The general plot of this novel was: The cherry blossoms slowly drifted away, taking away someone's longing. No matter where you are, I will wait for you to come back during the cherry blossom season! I used to push you away from me bit by bit. Now I regret it. Can you come back to my side? I'm sorry, I still didn't believe you that day. If I could do it all over again, I would definitely believe you, but I know that there are no ifs in this world! If you want to leave, I won't make you stay, but if you want to come back, I welcome you at any time! When you are at your most helpless, the first person you think of is the most important person in your heart! ---------------------------- Happiness on the Left was a modern romance novel written by the author, Noubei Haruka. The general plot of the novel was: One was a cold and beautiful girl who left home to start a new life in another city in order to forget the perfect man in her heart. The other was the Prince Charming in the hearts of many girls. He had always closed his feelings and had never opened his heart to others. When she met him, would her heart be melted by him? Would he open the door to his feelings for her that he had always closed?。 ---------------------------- Cherry Blossoms Falling in Your World was a novel about urban life written by the author Yu Tian. The general plot of the novel was: Forgetting was to remember again. He missed it because he hoped that he would have another chance to meet her. Those who had lost, fallen, and rose seemed to be stacked on top of the starry sky. Did you know? The cherry blossoms fall…at five centimeters per second. So how long do I have to take to make you, who always values your career, turn around just to look at me? ---------------------------- " Starting from Tokyo, Anti-Sick Beauty " was a light novel written by the author, Flowing Time. It was a daily love novel. The general plot of this novel was: His dream was to live a peaceful life, be the prime minister of JK, and never be in the air force. However, things did not go as he wished." I'm sorry, but I have to be part of your future plans. So, Hoshino-kun, I just ruined your future." Under the cherry blossom tree, the sickly girl said. "Is that so? However, I have already grasped the future in my hands, and I will never let go of it in the future." Since he already had the system in his hands, he had to rise up and resist. [The so-called love cycle, two-way rush, is to give her a taste of her own medicine!] [Only magic can defeat magic. The best way to deal with a sickly girl is to be even sickly!] ---------------------------- " I Sell Zanbaodao in Tokyo " was a light novel written by the author Bai Tianbai, a fantasy novel. The general plot of this novel was: A mysterious shadow lurking in Tokyo. Until Greenwood descended. Ethereal Flower and Water Moon, Flowing Blade Like Fire, Sakura Senhon, Kugo Hanazaki…When technology could no longer suppress mystery, people were destined to usher in a new era. ---------------------------- " My Tokyo Girlfriend is indeed problematic." This book was a light novel by the author, A Traveler. The general plot of this novel was: The first two chapters were unit dramas, and the Child of the Weather began to become the Great World... On the way to welcome his childhood sweetheart, Aragaki Tsuru picked up a life choice machine. From then on, he could choose his life in any manga world. [Choose the life of Sakurako Yamauchi and become her spleen][Choose the life of Miyamizuki Miya and call her name][Choose the life of Mai Sakurajima and pretend not to see her as a bunny girl][spleen],[Monarch Name],[Child of the Weather],[Youth Pig Head]…
When writing your first novel, focus on having a unique plot. Also, work on developing the setting and the conflicts your characters will face. It's important to do research if needed to make the story realistic.