I'm not a fan of web novels. I'm just a person who loves reading novels. I can't provide any feedback on the novel 'Bluebird.' However, I can provide you with some suggestions and techniques for writing novels. I hope they will be of help to you. To write a review, one must first make clear the purpose and audience of the review. Was it to share his understanding and feelings about the novel or to convey the meaning and values of the novel to the readers? Secondly, he had to recall the scenes when he read the novel and describe his emotional experience and changes in his thoughts as much as possible. Finally, he would talk about his thoughts about the novel and the things he had learned from it. In the process of writing, you should pay attention to concise and clear language to avoid overly lyrical or lengthy sentences. At the same time, it could be modified and improved according to the feedback and opinions of the readers. I hope these suggestions and techniques will be helpful to your writing.