What was the difference between Jin Yong's new version and the old one?

The first few chapters are a bit rough since I wasn't sure what I wanted the story to be like. And the story is a bit rushed until chapter 20-25ish since I wanted to get to the point after the kids get their spirits. After that, the story breaks from canon and slows down the pacing. Hopefully, you will give the story a chance. The joke at the beginning with sage is not indicative of how the story will progress, I just thought it would be funny at the time. ... You already know how it is. Someone gets reincarnated as Rimuru and decides that he wants to have a new life with a kingdom, a harem, and strong skills. I am a first-time writer so if you have any tips let me know. It's obvious but I don't own tensura nor its characters and the picture for the fanfic is not my art. If you are the artist of it let me know and I'll change it or add your name I just found the pic on google and wasn't sure who the artist was. I'll try to update regularly but I do have a full-time job so I probably can't do it daily.

I was just going a long with life. I simple worked as a waiter in a high class restaurant, went back home and that was it. I had no friends, never had a girlfriend and basically had no social life. My only pastimes were anime, manga and such, but there was one thing that I liked the most. Hentai. I couldn't count how many times I spend most of my free time simple watching hentais and masturbating. Sometimes I varied and jack off to erotic games and hentai manga as well. Sundelly I found myself in complely unkown space, in the presence of two being saying they were gods and they are offering an opportunity to live my sexual fantasies? What the hell is going on? Current schedule: 5 chapters/week Obs. 1: Despite being the second version of the story, it still is a work used for me to develop my writing skills. Read at least the fifteenth chapter before forming an opinion. Obs. 2: The protagonist won't start a a sexual master, so don't expect him to be always dominant on the beginning. He will grow over time, so be patient with me.

I was just going a long with life. I simple worked as a waiter in a high class restaurant, went back home and that was it. I had no friends, never had a girlfriend and basically had no social life. My only pastimes were anime, manga and such, but there was one thing that I liked the most. Hentai. I couldn't count how many times I spend most of my day simple watching hentais and masturbating. Sometimes I varied and jack off to erotic games and hentai manga as well. Sundelly I found myself in complely unkown space, in the presence of two being saying they are gods and they are offering am opportunity to live my sexual fantasies? What the hell is going on? *Current schedule - 1 chapter/day* *Warning: If you are looking for a too much serious work, look somewhere else.* *Warning: Any and all characters presented in this novel are 18 years old or above, regardless of description given in chapters.* *Warning: This story is something I just want to write to just pass time, and I'm going to change a few things of the original stories to accomodate this fanfic* *The cover is not mine. If the owner wishes, please enter in contact and the cover will be removed.*

Terminally ill before even reaching the age of 40, Song Nuanyi awaited a gloomy end. Her death just happened to clash with her son’s wedding. Yet, her children, who she painstakingly raised, her mother-in-law, who she served for so many years, and her husband, who she exchanged vows with to love and cherish forever, none of them noticed her. When they finally discovered her corpse, they simply said, “Just bury it.” Everyone else went on to enjoy the wedding while her funeral was empty with no visitors. No, one person did come. She watched as the person she despised cried his heart out in front of her grave, revealing his love for her. The sorrow in his voice made tears well up in her eyes. When she opened her eyes again, she had returned in time to the day before her wedding. The memories of her past life were still vivid in her mind. She hurried to the race track and found the man to blurt out, “I’m getting married tomorrow. Don’t you want to crash the wedding? Don’t you want to steal me away?” The man was stunned before snickering. “Ms. Song, did you hit your head?” She added insistently, “I’m asking you one last time, are you brave enough to come?” The man did not answer but pulled out a credit card instead. “Ms. Song, if something is wrong with your head, go and have it checked.” She took the card and said, “I’ll take this as your betrothal gift.” Having said that, she left. The man was dumbstruck, as he never expected her to take his card. News of the self-righteous young lady of the Song family seeking out the capital’s number one playboy, Young Master Jin, spread quickly. Someone asked the man what happened, but he just blew a whistle and said, “Come along with me tomorrow. We have a big business to do.” Song Nuanyi was anxious because she did not know when he started liking her in their past life. Would he even show up tomorrow? Character Setting: Song Nuanyi - self-righteous, aloof, noble young lady Wu Chenjin - frivolous, dandy, young master

This is the old version; the rewrite is underway! https://www.webnovel.com/book/30780541908206305 Synopsis: Philip lived his life like any university student, he went to the campus, heard his teachers, made his notes, went home, studied, and played some games with the boys at night. Until one fateful day. It was the final class of the year, and he together with all of the people present in the room, were transported to another world. In a strange and unfamiliar world, everyone received powers and abilities including him, but with a twist, he didn't receive a class. Only a skill. They weren't there to kill a demon king, nor they were there to prevent a war. Although you could say they were there to cause one... How will he do with his strange skill? And how will his "friends" act? Let's find out because I am also curious! . . . Hey! I am just here to say that I don't own the cover image, nor do I own the special abilities of the MC, you will see why. If you own any of these things and want me to take it down I will, but remember that currently, I am not receiving any money from this.

A young man reborn into his favorite world. He was granted some request after his death, but the problem was that the granter had no control over how those request were to be granted. Watch as he grows from a single boy in the dark to a protector who wishes to light the path forward for the magical world one step at a time. ———— I just couldn’t read other fanfics cause this idea just kept ringing in my head. It’s my very first time writing or posting anywhere. And I obviously don’t own any of the settings, but so what? I’m doing cause I felt like it and for the fun of it.