If you want to pass the review after writing the first chapter, you can refer to the following suggestions: 1. Setting the background and theme of the story: In the first chapter, you can briefly introduce the background and theme of the story to let the readers understand the story world and the main plot. Prominent characters: In the first chapter, you need to highlight the image and characteristics of the main characters to make the readers interested in them and understand their motives and goals. 3. Create conflict: In the first chapter, you need to create conflict to make the reader interested in the story and want to continue reading. You can create conflicts by describing the tension between the characters or unexpected events. A good beginning will attract the reader's attention and make them want to continue reading. It takes appropriate language and rhetoric to make the opening interesting. Maintain the story's continuity: In the first chapter, you need to ensure the story's continuity and avoid contradictions or logical errors. 6. Revise the text: After completing the first chapter, you can spend some time revising the text to ensure the logic and cohesiveness of the story and to improve the legibility of the text. I hope these suggestions can help me create a fascinating novel!