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English is not my first language so please take care of me and if you find mistakes in it tell me I fix it as soon as possible. Max Winchester died due to an "accident" while reading the novel after his death he meet God who allowed him to travel through and do whatever he think best but on condition to make Protagonist's life miserable. He also gives him the strongest system [Netori system] that help him steal Protagonists Woman, Chances, Luck, etc Why does God want to make that Protagonist's life miserable? And why [Netori system] given to the max let's find out. (English will get better after chapter 38.) I don't own a book cover, I find it online, If creator wants me to change it just message me, I will remove it.

"You don't belong here." "Perhaps to you I don't but I'm not going anywhere," I replied unwilling to let him scare me. A deep chuckle left his throat as he stepped closer, "I can do terrible things to you-" Damian, and his brothers, were a mysterious sort and every moment with them, I was begging for pleasure. ~~~ When Ivy Thorne got accepted to one of the best Universities for Agriculture, she refused to miss the opportunity. The only problem she never expected was the four men who lived in her father's home would gradually turn her world upside down. Dangerous things don't live just in the wild. Often, they lurked closer to home and if she wasn't careful, she would find herself the center of their hunger. Their own little red riding hood. This story is rated 18+ for explicit language and sexual content. And Then There Were Four is created by Lillith Carrie, an eGlobal Creative Publishing signed author.

Sign-in to get T-Virus, sign-in to get Haki, sign-in to get magic, sign-in to get ninjutsu. This is a story of a Hao Yun who uses the sign-in system to sign in to the heavens, step by step from ordinary people to superheroes! “Thanos get ready I’ll sign-in to defeat you!!” This is translated novel. Please give it 5 stars review!! Translator site: readfanfic . com P atreon: p atreon.co m/RF_MWZ

Blake a guy who has been betrayed by the person who he thought, his future yet she was nothing more than a selfish bitch. After being betrayed he caught a second stage cancer, and when he thought all hope was gone all of sudden he was invited to be the administrator of a multiversal Group Chat! Where he could interact with fictional characters! Group Chat Members (Currently) : Counter Guardian EMIYA (FGO) Jaune Arc (RWBY) Satan/Lucifer (Helltaker) Echidna (Re:Zero) Disclaimer: I do not own anything aside from my OC's

[ Discord: name : Merciless Clan lien: https://discord.com/invite/2m7XzWyEDQ] In this unique twist on the typical hero-villain dynamic, our protagonist, the villain, finds himself compelled to save humanity from powerful races threatening its existence. Meanwhile, the hero is preoccupied with gathering a harem. The story unfolds as the villain must not only confront external threats but also challenge so-called heroes, proving his perspective and ultimately taking on their responsibilities to ensure humanity's survival. As alliances shift and moral complexities emerge, the narrative explores the unexpected journey of redemption and sacrifice.

THIS IS A TRANSLATION! A man from Earth reincarnates accidentally to become the Thirteenth Son of Hun Tian Di. with no cheat, he thought his life was bleak, that is until he awakened his Sign In System. Since awakening it, Hun Han stood high in the sky and rose above the Heavens. Soon, he was standing in the sky above the Falling Star Pavilion while holding Gu Xun'er's hand. In this life, the Hun Clan is destined to unify the Dou Qi continent! All Rights belong to: Three Idle Farmers Read my Completed Novel: Exploding Attributes System In Douluo Dalu Support me on P.A.T.R.E.O.N and read 3 different Novels there, including being over 70 Chapters ahead of here! w.w.w.p.a.t.r.e.o.n.com/divindragoncelestialthearch