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The beginning of the novel is slow, and the rhythm is not strong. How can I change it?

2024-09-22 23:05
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The slow start of the novel could be improved in the following ways: 1. Strengthening the background and character settings to allow the reader to better understand the background and character, thus allowing the reader to enter the story atmosphere faster. 2. Establishing the world view and setting of the story. By clearly describing the characteristics and rules of the world, it can enhance the rhythm of the story. 3. Use vivid language and figurative metaphor to describe the scenes and characters so that the readers can resonate more easily and get emotionally involved in the story more quickly. 4. Build the conflict and suspense of the story to enhance the rhythm of the story through fascinating plots and twists. 5. Use narrative techniques such as inserting memories and describing inner feelings to extend the length of the story and enhance the rhythm of the story. In short, the beginning of the novel should attract the attention of the readers as much as possible so that they would be willing to continue reading. By strengthening the background of the story, establishing a worldview and setting, using vivid language and metaphor, establishing conflict and suspense, and extending the length of the story, the slow start of the novel could be improved and the rhythm of the story could be enhanced.

The Wife of the Wealthy Family Is Fierce and Cute.

The Wife of the Wealthy Family Is Fierce and Cute.

A woman from ancient times falls in love with her soulmate. Chu Luo is the most powerful High Priestess. She is like a celestial being, able to peer into the secrets of heaven and sever life and death. Her skills in medicine and poison are the best in the world. One day sudden death greets her and she is reborn in the body of a problematic girl who was about to graduate from high school and had planned to commit suicide by jumping off a building because of a failed confession. Her parents did not love her; her biological sister bullied her, and her classmates were violent… The corners of Chu Luo's lips curls up into a cold arc. 'Very good, anyone who dares to bully me will be killed without mercy!' … Later… The priest is only passionate about three things: 1. Being first place wins all kinds of certificate awards. 2. Specialize in all kinds of things and never admit defeat. 3. Act cute to Li Yan. … Li Yan is the king of the business empire. He is cold-blooded, heartless, and has a violent temperament. He disregards his family and is called the Devil in private. Legend has it that a few years ago, he burned away half of his family with a fire. Because of this, he was cursed and his legs became disabled. … Later on… Everyone is horrified to discover that the Devil and the Demoness are together! The Devil has even become a crazy wife-doting demon! Scenes: Master Li: "My Luoluo's body is delicate and expensive. If anyone dares to bully her, I'll send them to hell." The group of experts who have been beaten up by Chu Luo into a sorry pulp: "Master Li, are you blind?" Master Li: "My Luoluo doesn't like studying. Please be more forgiving." Teachers from various professions: "Could it be that the person who thrashed our class's top student is someone else?"
4.4
670 Chs
The Fake Daughter Is Not Innocent

The Fake Daughter Is Not Innocent

In her previous life, Xiao Ying had grown up as the daughter of a wealthy family with a silver spoon in her mouth. She had thought that she would live out her days in peace. However, someone secretly told her that she was not the daughter of the Xiao family, and from then on, she had been living in fear—afraid that her secret would be exposed and her parents would abandon her. She was desperate not to lose her luxurious lifestyle, so she desperately tried to keep everything as it was! However, just before the moment of her death, she realized that this had all been part of the Xiao family's scheme. They were just trying to trick her out of her amulet! Their real daughter had been living a pampered life outside of the house all along! After being reborn, she returned to when she was ten years old. Her amulet had transformed into the most powerful learning system in existence, all stored within Xiao Ying's mind! She resolutely left the Xiao Family, abandoning that world of superficial hypocrisy. With a bit of manoeuvring, she was taken under a new wing! Xiao Ying: "Boss, do you need a weapon? I’ll be anything you need!" Cheng Yang: "I need to do a quality check first!" Harnessing the power of the learning system, she could execute all kinds of skills at a glance. Martial arts, dance, computing skills, and so on—everything had become a piece of cake to her! Cheng Yang was very satisfied with his new weapon! In no time at all, Xiao Ying began becoming more and more beautiful, and more and more suitors began taking note. A certain big boss could no longer remain calm. Cheng Yang wrapped his hands around Xiao Ying's slender waist. "You should've learned how to be my wife and given birth to a baby for me earlier!"
4.4
210 Chs
HOW DID THE GENRE CHANGE??

HOW DID THE GENRE CHANGE??

What will you do when you suddenly woke up as a baby in one of your favourite books? Just like any other transmigrated book or reincarnation in your everyday novel, Rehan was also reading a book named " ALL IS MISUNDERSTANDING" when he died and was born as a villainess brother. But what was written and what he experienced in the book was totally upside down. He was in a mess and the only thought in the mind is that he is being cheated on by this smiling demon called male lead and a rotten girl his sister and his sister's so-called enemy best friend Female lead. He doesn't know how to deal with all this, so let us be his supporter and be a part of his journey and get to know whether he changed the genre of the book or was it all but a misunderstanding. Abstract "Ad......Adrian wha.......what are you doing?" Lucas (Rehan) stuttered as he was cornered to the wall. Rehan has always been oblivious to his surroundings and the feeling of others but at this time he could feel the anger and frustration coming out of his friend. " Me " Adrian raised his eyebrow and pointed at him. " I am claiming what rightfully belongs to me", saying that he dipped his head towards Rehan's lips and kissed him hard. The personality of MC and ML Lucas Evans (Rehan)- Proud, business-minded, loves his family to death, competitive, hate to lose especially to certain someone. Adrian Hemsworth- Proud, business-minded, loves to win especially to his proud friend, cold-hearted smiling demon\ devil and shameless towards certain someone. This story is age-progressive so it starts from their childhood. You get to know their childhood and how they become frenemies to a friend, Friend to best friends, best friends to lovers and finally husbands. This story won't have misunderstandings maybe a few here and there but not long and I don't like angst too it won't consist of that too. It will have some drama. This story will be a fluffy, comedy and some childishness and certainly love between family, siblings and between partners. Warnings My FIRST language ISN'T ENGLISH so there will be some grammatical mistakes so please be patient with me and correct me but with gentle words. And I won't force anybody to read my book but if you love my book I will welcome reviews and comments. MY LIFE MOTTO IS " DON'T JUDGE OTHERS AND DON'T LET OTHERS JUDGE YOU TOO." WE SHOULD LIVE OUR LIFE AND LET OTHERS LIVE THEIRS TOO. DO COMMENT AND GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS THAT WILL HELP IN THE GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT OF THE BOOK. YOUR SUPPORT ALWAYS MOTIVATES ME. I will a chapter a day. if I can I would post more chapters. I hope you can motivate me to write with power stones, comments, reviews, gifts, and golden tickets. It is shameless but I hope you understand. And those who support this book be it voting via power stone, commenting, gifting, or through golden tickets please do read the author's comments in every chapter as I always mention them. And those who gift the story do look forward to the chapter dedicated solely to them. The cover doesn't belong to me. I don't know the artist too. Fans Arts submission is heartily welcome. DO CHECK MY OTHER BOOK: FATE'S WHISPER (ROMANCE CARNIVAL) FOLLOW ME ON. twitter- CHArgergirl_06 IG- ch.ar2155 DIscord-CHArgergirl#9795 THANK YOU
4.8
261 Chs
Daily Life of The Student Council President is not Peaceful

Daily Life of The Student Council President is not Peaceful

" Kaguya don't look at me like that, i swear my relationship with Hitagi Senjougahara and Arisu Sakayanagi is absolutely normal. We are just friends." " My goddess Rin Tosaka, your mocking is like a confession to me. The more you insult me the more i can feel how much you care about me." " Oi cuck! Keep your dirty eyes off my Chizuru!" " Hey! Zero Two don't eat a banana like that , you can only eat like that in front of me . Put on some clothes Power." " Erina your cooking is just as good as your god tongue." " Megumin isn't underage, she's just a bit underdeveloped. So she's legal alright." " Kasumigaoka-senpai why don't we discuss the plot of the novel tonight?" "Marin i will make you a Star." " Oh ! Mai-senpai i heard no entertainment company is willing to give you a contract, such outrage! Well i happened to buy an telivision company a few days back. Why don't you join us? Hatsune miku and Ai Hoshino is also there. The fans would be thrilled to see u three rivals together." " Mikasa ! You lost your memories ! i was your childhood friend! " " If anyone dares to touch my little sister Nezuko, i am gonna bring my Gundum and kill you all." " Hehehe Asuna u can't say i didn't warn you...Wait ! Fujiwara-san don't drink that, it's alcohol!" " Yor, you can't leave me until I broke my end of the deal. So you are stuck with me just like you CC. " " Nuke them! Lala is mine! And mine alone!" " Yukino , i don't need moral judgement from you..I have Makima for that." " Miku you should share everything with your sisters, right?" ii " No one can see Komi-san's smile other than me!" (Author) : "Dude just pick one, it's getting very confusing." O..you shut up the shity author. I am the destined protagonist. I will use any means necessary to have my dream harem! You better don't have any dirty about my waifus, they are all mine....I am gonna catch them all...... . 'Never giving up' is one of my character tropes , remember? Come on girls what's with those eyes? I , the Student Council President aka 1412 , unmatched by likes of Conan, kira, Ayanokouji or L , is clearly an honest person. Isn't that right Sagiri? "Nissan brought home an unknown woman again?" "Nissan is an idiot, Nissan is a fool, Nissan is a pervert, Nissan is a hentai light novel protagonist !!!" ___________________
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