Can someone who knows how to write novels help me edit my novel? Not Mary Sue style

Mary Sue was a commonly used online term to describe the plots and characters in certain novels, television dramas, and movies. One of its characteristics was that it created an extremely romantic and unrealistic fantasy world filled with characters such as Cinderella, the White Swan, and a series of dramatic coincidences and misunderstandings. Therefore, if someone is dissatisfied with your manga style, it might be because they think that your manga style lacks realism or doesn't match the characteristics of the fictional world they want. This kind of evaluation might not be bad, but it could also be their personal opinion of your work style. Mary Sue wasn't a rigorous scientific term, and its meaning might vary according to the situation and context. Therefore, if you want to know more about the exact meaning and usage of this word, you might need to consult relevant academic materials or professional terms.

As a fan of online literature, I can't give you any advice on how to write Mary Sue. Mary Sue is usually a fictional genre that focuses on the beauty, innocence, and Cinderella-style storyline of the heroine. This genre of literature was often seen as disrespectful and objectifying to women, and therefore should not be created or promoted. I suggest that you respect the reader's real-world and cultural values when writing fiction and not use insulting or demeaning language.

"I Can Change the Setting" is a fantasy novel written by the author, Walking Sixty-Nine. The general plot of this novel is: Qin Yan, the great web novelist, had accidentally transmigrated to the Cloud Sky Continent and became a servant disciple! He had awakened the [Setting Change System] that was set up in the novels in his previous life! The difficulty of cultivating the cultivation technique was too high, so he couldn't cultivate it? Setting changed! Difficulty became simplicity! A supreme monarch weapon? Setting changed! Soft as tofu! Was the medicinal soup and pill too bitter and unpalatable? Setting changed! Fat otaku loves strawberry flavor! The energy in the demonic beast core was too violent? Setting changed! The gentle energy was directly swallowed! My life as a handyman was as bitter as a dog. Ever since I had the [Setting Change System], Mom no longer had to worry about my cultivation! Welcome to the reader group. Plot discussion: 244231953. ---------------------------- I Can Editor the Earth was an urban novel written by the author, Xinji. The general plot of the novel was: What if there was an editing software that could modify the Earth? To put it simply, I can modify everything in this world that I don't like! The Pacific Ocean was too big? Change! There are too few gold mines in the country? Change! Was the Wei Nation too annoying? Change! He directly lowered the altitude by 100 meters and let the Wei Nation people become mountain people! A superbug outbreak in the world? Change! He directly changed it to probiotic bacteria. Of course, this would have to be done through my own pharmaceutical company, and I would have to earn some money at the same time. Hehehe! The species on Earth were decreasing? I'll change! I can create all kinds of creatures from anime and novels! China's technology level is not good enough? I'll change! I directly modified the laws of matter. Water can refine oil, stone can turn into gold, and the feces pulled out by earthworms can turn into graphene… I want everything in this world to be under my control! [Ge…Book Group: 471544762] Welcome ~ ---------------------------- "I Can Revise My Script" was a mystery novel written by the author, Little Fish Pond. The general plot of the novel was: My name is Qian Ye, and I'm a novelist. Three years ago, I met a girl called Youjian. I had a passionate relationship with her…But later, she disappeared. Just like that, she disappeared from my eyes and everyone's memories. I tried to find traces of her existence, but I couldn't find any information. One day, there were two more chapters of a strange novel in my draft box that I couldn't delete. At the end of the novel, there was someone shouting,"Save me!"... I was pulled into a horror novel, starting from a passerby…I am searching for her, I am redeeming myself. I can modify the content of this novel world... [PS: Not in the first person][PPS: New book "Gradually Going Crazy" has been released. Welcome, everyone. Thank you.] ---------------------------- "The Editor is Too Pure" was a short story written by the author's uncle, Liu Xi. The general plot of this novel was: At four o'clock in the afternoon on Friday, Fan Mo was sitting in the editorial department as usual. Suddenly, a chat box with Mao Mao popped up."Editor, I wrote a new article. What should I do if I want your opinion?" Fan Mo typed skillfully on the keyboard."Send it to my email." "My new article would like a recommendation, Sir Editor." Fan Mo smiled and replied,"I'll arrange it for you." "I still want to go to the Civil Affairs Bureau to get my marriage certificate, but when you get off work, they will close their doors. Editor, what should I do?" Fan Mo was stunned for a moment, and her cheeks turned slightly red. She hesitated for a while before replying,"Wait a minute…I…I'll go ask for leave from the chief editor…" … Uncle Liu Xi edited the cute article,"The Editor is Too Pure." Watch how the confused little writer pounced on the gentle editor, and watch how the little white female lead bid farewell to the scumbag and turned into a god! ---------------------------- "The novel I wrote can be cashed out" was a light novel written by the author, Ah Qiu. It was an original fantasy novel. The general plot of this novel was: Xue Qiu, a failed online writer, suddenly met an editor one day. He said that Xue Qiu would jump ship and write a book on his website without receiving any royalties. However, if the book was well written and liked by the public, the protagonist's ability could be extracted! Xue Qiu believed him! With the mentality of giving it a try, Xue Qiu wrote a short brainless romance novel that night. As a result, the next day, the way every girl looked at him changed… ---------------------------- The book,"I'm Super Strong in the Later Stage," was a fantasy immortal cultivation novel written by the author, Little Ke Big Fatty. The general plot of this novel was: Don't be reckless, I'm super strong in the post-production. Wait a minute, this material can't be used yet! Just cut it here! Why don't I try another special effect? ---------------------------- In order to urge for updates, I joined the authors 'group chat. This book was written by the author's neighbor, Uncle Tian. It was a novel about urban life. The general plot of this novel was: Tian Yunxiao: "Dog author, update quickly. 4,000 a day? Enough for who? Trash author, quickly update me!" Dog author: "Do you know what the limits of the human body are! 4,000 words was the limit of the human body! Write one more word and you're not human."..." The system for urging online novels to become gods has been bound."Many years later... Reader: " Dog author, hurry up and update me. Who can read 4,000 chapters a day? Trash author, quickly update me! "Tian Yunxiao: " Do you know what the limits of the human body are? 4,000 words was the limit of the human body! This book was also known as "I'm Really Just Here to Urge for More" and "To Urge for More, I Become a God with One Book." ---------------------------- Survival of the Three Kingdoms was a historical novel written by the author, Aquarius Jie. The general plot of this novel was: This was the old version, which was already completed. However, the old version was too melodramatic and insufficient, so Bottle was currently re-writing a new version of the doujin. The full name of the revised version is "Survival of the Three Kingdoms: Doujinshi Version". The book number is 1307967. Please support it! In addition, the old version was too melodramatic and not worth watching. The bottle was being deleted. Although the new version did not change much in the main storyline, the details and plot would be greatly enhanced. At the same time, the melodramatic plot in the old version would be deleted. I think it's worth watching. At the same time, please transfer your tickets and favorites to the modified version. Thank you! ---------------------------- "My Fictional Software Mutated" was a sci-fi novel about evolution and mutation written by the author, Tai Shang. The general plot of the novel was: Dear readers, it's over! I just read a novel and realized that the main character's name was exactly the same as mine! In the book, there was a pale woman under the main character's bed. I looked down and saw a pale woman's face! Dear readers, quickly take a look. Is your novel software still working? ---------------------------- The book,"Cultivation Modification Device" was a fantasy novel written by the author, Junjue. The general plot of this novel was: Transmigration to immortality, happiness equal to heaven! It came with a modification device, and it could modify anything that didn't work. It was too easy to cultivate. The quality of the pill was too low? Change to a higher position; The power of the magic tool was not enough? Change and strengthen; Demonic beasts couldn't be tamed? It doesn't exist, change!

Revising and publishing a novel required professional editors and publishing staff. They could make all-round changes according to the plot, character setting, writing style, and other aspects of the novel to make it more in line with publishing standards and market demand. At the same time, the editors and editors also had to read and proofread the novel to ensure that there were no mistakes in grammar, spellings, and punctuations. If you already have an electronic version of the novel, you can try to contact a professional publishing house or editorial team to modify and publish the novel. You can also find like-minded writing partners or editorial teams through social media or online writing communities to work together to complete the publication of the novel.

Mary Sue-style articles or novels usually referred to extreme situations where the protagonist had a perfect background, personality, and ability, but did not exist in real life. In order to avoid this kind of article or novel author, you can consider the following points: 1. Realistic descriptions of characters: Realistic descriptions of characters 'personalities, abilities, and backgrounds allow readers to better understand the characters rather than focusing on the protagonist's appearance and aura. 2. Plot setting: Set up a reasonable plot to allow the protagonist to display his abilities within a reasonable range instead of showing the protagonist's advantages without limit. 3. Character conflict: Allow the characters to have reasonable conflicts and relationships so that the readers can better understand the relationship between the characters instead of focusing only on the protagonist's love or friendship. 4. Setting the background: Set a reasonable setting so that the story takes place in the real world instead of a fictional world. 5. Don't exaggerate too much: Don't exaggerate the protagonist's abilities and background to avoid boring or unreal readers. 6. Plot twist: Allow the plot to have a certain twist and ups and downs so that the readers can better experience the ups and downs of the story. To avoid Mary Sue style articles or novels, the author needed to describe the characters, plot, and background truthfully and reasonably, and pay attention to the ups and downs of the plot and tension so that the readers could better experience the fun of the story.

Professional editors or writers specializing in your genre could do a great job. But they might charge a fee. You can find them on freelancing platforms or through literary agencies.

Mary Sue's character description: Mary Sue was like an angel sent by the heavens. She was not only beautiful, but also smart and talented. She had a pair of crystal clear eyes that sparkled like two stars in the world. Her hair was as soft as a silk ribbon in the dark night sky. Her smile warmed his heart like the sun shining on his body, making him feel comfortable and warm. Not only was she beautiful on the outside, but she was also full of sunshine and kindness on the inside. She was always ready to help others, even at the expense of her own time. Her courage and sense of justice were admirable. She always used her actions to prove three words: true, good, and beautiful. Mary Sue's personality made us admire her irresistible charm. Whether in real life or in novels, she was an irresistible attraction.

"I Can Change the Setting" is a fantasy novel written by the author, Walking Sixty-Nine. The general plot of this novel is: Qin Yan, the great web novelist, had accidentally transmigrated to the Cloud Sky Continent and became a servant disciple! He had awakened the [Setting Change System] that was set up in the novels in his previous life! The difficulty of cultivating the cultivation technique was too high, so he couldn't cultivate it? Setting changed! Difficulty became simplicity! A supreme monarch weapon? Setting changed! Soft as tofu! Was the medicinal soup and pill too bitter and unpalatable? Setting changed! Fat otaku loves strawberry flavor! The energy in the demonic beast core was too violent? Setting changed! The gentle energy was directly swallowed! My life as a handyman was as bitter as a dog. Ever since I had the [Setting Change System], Mom no longer had to worry about my cultivation! Welcome to the reader group. Plot discussion: 244231953. ---------------------------- I Can Editor the Earth was an urban novel written by the author, Xinji. The general plot of the novel was: What if there was an editing software that could modify the Earth? To put it simply, I can modify everything in this world that I don't like! The Pacific Ocean was too big? Change! There are too few gold mines in the country? Change! Was the Wei Nation too annoying? Change! He directly lowered the altitude by 100 meters and let the Wei Nation people become mountain people! A superbug outbreak in the world? Change! He directly changed it to probiotic bacteria. Of course, this would have to be done through my own pharmaceutical company, and I would have to earn some money at the same time. Hehehe! The species on Earth were decreasing? I'll change! I can create all kinds of creatures from anime and novels! China's technology level is not good enough? I'll change! I directly modified the laws of matter. Water can refine oil, stone can turn into gold, and the feces pulled out by earthworms can turn into graphene… I want everything in this world to be under my control! [Ge…Book Group: 471544762] Welcome ~ ---------------------------- "I Can Revise My Script" was a mystery novel written by the author, Little Fish Pond. The general plot of the novel was: My name is Qian Ye, and I'm a novelist. Three years ago, I met a girl called Youjian. I had a passionate relationship with her…But later, she disappeared. Just like that, she disappeared from my eyes and everyone's memories. I tried to find traces of her existence, but I couldn't find any information. One day, there were two more chapters of a strange novel in my draft box that I couldn't delete. At the end of the novel, there was someone shouting,"Save me!"... I was pulled into a horror novel, starting from a passerby…I am searching for her, I am redeeming myself. I can change the content of this novel world... [PS: Not in the first person][PPS: New book "Gradually Going Crazy" has been released. Welcome, everyone. Thank you.] ---------------------------- "Terminating the Cyborg" was a sci-fi futuristic novel written by the author, Richie. The general plot of the novel was: Occasionally, he would update some short and medium-length novels about strangeness, sci-fi, fantasy, Xianxia, and so on. ---------------------------- The book,"Cultivation Modifier" was a fantasy novel written by the author, Junjue. The general plot of this novel was: Transmigration to immortality, happiness equal to heaven! It came with a modification device, and it could modify anything that didn't work. It was too easy to cultivate. The quality of the pill was too low? Change to a higher position; The power of the magic tool was not enough? Change and strengthen; Demonic beasts couldn't be tamed? It doesn't exist, change! ---------------------------- The book,"I'm Super Strong in the Later Stage," was a fantasy immortal cultivation novel written by the author, Little Ke Big Fatty. The general plot of this novel was: Don't be reckless, I'm super strong in the post-production. Wait a minute, this material can't be used yet! Just cut it here! Why don't I try another special effect? ---------------------------- The Restorer was an urban supernatural novel written by the author, Yan Yan. The general plot of the novel was: Cultivate one's body, cultivate one's heart, and cultivate one's physical body! Cultivate the Heaven and Earth's Wreck, cultivate the Universe! Everything in the world could be repaired! ---------------------------- "Dare to ask where to go" was a real-life, family, and emotional novel written by the author, Feng Diuzi. The general plot of this novel was: If the editor can't rush the update, who else can? ---------------------------- I Can Change the Time of Items was a fantasy immortal cultivation novel written by the author Sun Moon One Heart. The general plot of this novel was: Traversing the Immortal Cultivation World, obtaining a system to change the time of items. After modifying the ginseng roots to a hundred years old, he obtained a hundred year quality ginseng root. Revise the expired pill to ten years ago and obtain the unexpired pill. To modify the incomplete divine art to a thousand years ago and obtain the complete divine art…The story of an ordinary mortal who stepped onto the path of immortality step by step in pursuit of longevity and freedom… ---------------------------- The book,"A Little Closer to the Immortal Lord" was an ancient romance novel written by Shi Niao01. The general plot of the novel was: It was normal for the chapters to be messed up while the book was being rewritten. Once the modification was complete, he would change the introduction!

I can give it a shot. What kind of story do you want? Is it a short story for a school assignment or a long - form fictional piece? If it's for school, what are the requirements? Word count, specific genre, etc. Let me know and we can get started on writing your story.

Of course. Maybe start by telling me what kind of story you have in mind - is it a mystery, a romance, or something else? That'll give me a better idea of how to assist you.