I wrote a chapter of a novel today. I hope you can tell me where the words are inappropriate or give me a comment.

This story mainly shows that A Gang is about to succeed Peng Geli in "The Goblin's Tail". The content: The second week after he returned from ten years ago, a letter fell from the sky… "Da!" Wren stuck his tongue on the envelope and passed it to Liboen. "Thanks, Wren." "Hmm?" Liboen looked at the envelope."The Death Energy Flame. It seems like it was sent by the ninth leader." After reading the letter, he said,"It's time to inherit Pengri…" Ah Gang, who had just woken up, said,"Hey, Liboen, what are you doing here?" Liboen: "Ah Gang, do you want to go on a trip? As long as it takes." Ah Gang yawned."Hah…No, it must be that mountain or mafia paradise again…" "I have to go even if I don't want to!" "How can there be such a domineering person!" In the afternoon, Ah Gang and the others headed to the center of the sea… "I don't want to go…I don't want to go…" Ah Gang cried. "It's too late." "Speaking of which, why did Prison Temple and the others go too?" "It's not bad to train with friends." Ah Gang: "What? So it's another special training over there!" "It's my honor to train with the tenth leader!" Yamamoto: "I heard from Little Joker that there's high-end equipment for baseball practice, so I want to give it a try." (Ah Gang: You've been tricked by Liboen…) "I heard from Mr. Liboen that there's a big black bear over there who wants to compete with me!" (A Gang: Can a bear talk?) Apart from Yuji, Yamamoto, and Ryouhei, there was also Rambo, Ippei, Skylark, Kulom, Kyoko, and Haru. Suddenly, Ah Gang said, This feeling is…! "Kufufu…Pengri, long time no see." "Six Paths Skeleton!" Ah Gang and Skylark said in unison. Skylark raised her duckweed cane. Skylark, I didn't come here to fight you." Skylark put down his weapon. "Six Paths Skeleton, aren't you in the Avenger's Prison?" "Those avengers have memories from ten years later. They know that I helped you defeat Prynne and freed me." After arriving at a small island… "We're here." A helicopter landed not far from Ah Gang. "A helicopter?" Shingichi Irie, Spana, and Dino walked out of the helicopter. "Mr. Irie, Spana, Dino?" "Don't worry about them. All owners of Pengri's ring, light the ring and face the mountain peak." Everyone acted according to Riboen's instructions, and a black hole appeared in the sky. Except for Liboen, Ah Gang and the others were all sucked into the black hole. Ah Gang: "Waaah!" "It's flying, it's flying!" "Ah Gang…take care…" (End of Chapter 1)