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6. The Riot of the Corpses "Brother, Brother Zhang! What was going on! Why is there a wall of corpses!" Wu Sanhuo sat up trembling and pointed at the corpse wall. " I don't know, but one thing is for sure. This is a trap!" I studied the wall. "Brother Zhang, let's go back! This place is too terrifying!" Wu Sanhuo trembled as he spoke. I shrugged helplessly. The entrance is sealed by rocks." "Ah! God, why are you messing with me! So be it, but you still trapped me here! I haven't married yet!" When Wu Sanhuo heard this, he cried on the ground. Seeing his behavior, I thought to myself,'Sigh, I won't bring him to fight in reverse no matter what next time! You're giving me trouble. "Brother Zhang, let's go," Wu Sanhuo stood up and said to me. "Hey, why aren't you crying anymore?" I joked. Wu Sanhuo was about to counterattack when he accidentally tripped over a rock and flew towards me. His hands kept grabbing at the rock. At this moment, Wu Sanhuo suddenly pulled a corpse off the corpse wall. I thought it was bad, but it was too late. A large corpse monster crawled out from the corpse that Wu Sanhuo had dragged down. It turned its head to look at the corpse wall. I couldn't help but retreat. Bean-sized sweat covered my entire body. A chill attacked me. My legs didn't listen to my instructions. They kept trembling as if they were filled with lead. I couldn't move no matter what. The wall of corpses began to collapse, revealing corpse beetles of all sizes. However, the corpses looked at us one by one. Blood gushed out from their sunken eyes, and their mouths were wide open as if they were roaring, mocking us for being the next batch of deaths. "Squeak! Squeak!" The zombie beetles started to move and surrounded us. "Brother Zhang, what should we do?" Wu Sanhuo said fearfully," Kill! Otherwise, we'll become their dessert!" I was extremely angry and shouted at Wu Sanhuo. "Squeak!" A few small zombie beetles flew towards us, and I cut them in half with my paratrooper knife. However, the zombie beetles did not retreat, and the encirclement became smaller and smaller. "I can't take it anymore! If this continues, we will be eaten alive by them! Huo Zi, I'll charge, you cover me with fire!" I roared and charged into the zombie horde. Wu Sanhuo held his M16 and fired wildly at my surroundings. One by one, the zombie beetles were turned into a hornet's nest by the bullets. However, the corpse beetles still surged towards me like a tide. I slashed down and a football-sized corpse behemoth was cut in half. With another slash, a few zombie beetles flew out and fell to the ground dead. In an instant, the ground was covered in insect blood. When the corpse beetles saw their companions die one by one, not only were they not afraid, they became even angrier and pounced at me crazily. My eyes were bloodshot from killing, and I slashed with all my might, splitting several corpse beetles into two. "F * ck, isn't this Corpse Beetle too crazy?!" I cursed at the zombie horde. "If I don't show my true abilities, you'd better f * cking beg for mercy!" I roared and the paratrooper knife flew out like an arrow. Many corpse beetles were cut into pieces, and a small number of them were missing arms and legs, screaming in pain on the ground. "Ah!" Wu Sanhuo screamed. I immediately turned around and saw that a large piece of flesh on the back of his hand had been torn off, revealing his white bones. A few zombie beetles the size of ping pong balls were enjoying the delicious food-human flesh. "Huo Zi, I'm here to save you! You…" Before I could finish, I fell to the ground. Two volleyball-sized zombie beetles bit my arm tightly and blood flowed out. I made up my mind and gritted my teeth as I took out my spare short knife. I forcefully threw the corpse monster off my body and stomped on it with a few feet. "Squeak!" More than a dozen small corpse beetles bit my back. I shook my head and fell to the ground in pain. Wu Sanhuo saw this and ignored the pain in his hand. He immediately chased the corpse beetles off my back. I struggled to stand up and endured the pain as I gave Wu Sanhuo a thumbs up. "Squeak!" The zombie beetles began to launch a general attack. It was a dark mass. I searched my backpack and found a detonator. I threw it into the zombie beetles. "Boom!" The zombie beetles exploded in the middle of the horde. One by one, the zombie beetles were blown away and fell to the ground. They were dead and their flesh was a mess. The zombie beetles were stunned for a moment. I seized the opportunity to pull Wu Sanhuo and run deeper. The zombie horde is chasing us. F * ck, these zombie beetles 'willpower is really tenacious! Looks like they won't stop until they eat us raw! He had to think of a way. I looked at the top of the tunnel. There were some cracks, probably caused by the explosion just now. "Right!" I was extremely excited and threw a few detonators on the ground, thinking that this power should be able to blow up the passage. "Boom!" With a loud bang, the tunnel collapsed, separating us from the zombie horde. I exhaled and sat on the ground. I opened the medical kit and bandaged my wound. On the other side, the corpse monster roared indignantly.