I wrote a poem with a paragraph at the end. It was like a novel. Who can help me check if there are any inadequacies or mistakes in the writing? Thank you.

Poetry is a form of literature that usually uses concise and beautiful language to express the author's feelings and thoughts. If you want to write an excellent poem, you need to pay attention to the following aspects: 1. Language should be concise and clear, and avoid using overly complicated or difficult to understand words and sentences. 2. The expression must be precise. It must be able to accurately convey the author's emotions and thoughts through words. The rhythm and rhythm of a poem can help the reader feel the emotion and artistic conception of the poem. Based on the above aspects, I can help you check your poems to see if there are any shortcomings or mistakes. First of all, there are some problems with your poetic language, such as: - Use words or sentences that are difficult to understand, causing the reader to be unable to understand your emotions and thoughts. - The language was too plain and lacked expressiveness. He needed to use some vivid words and sentences to enhance the appeal of the poem. Next, there are some problems with your words, emotions, and artistic conception, such as: - Words that are too plain and lack emotional depth need to use some rhetorical devices to enhance the emotional expression of the words, such as metaphor, personification, etc. - Words are too abstract and lack concrete images. Some image descriptions need to be used to enhance the image and appeal of the words. For example, the petals of flowers are soft as cotton, and the veins of leaves are clear as iron. In summary, your poems and words still need to be improved. I hope that through continuous practice and improvement, you can write an excellent poem and words.