Which sentences in this novel made people feel especially Mary Sue?

(Extended Hiatus) Being a socially inept terminally ill person for most of his life, Simon dies after completing his novel. What is waiting for him? A cliche mess that he had written himself. Watch as he becomes OP through his knowledge and random coincidence. “Why did I make my MC an edgelord?” “Why does this system make me too OP?” “Why am I bored?” “Why did I put harem in my novel?” Read before the MC drops this novel himself!

"From now on, let the world feel pain." Above Konoha, Uzumaki Naruto started to talk indifferently, throwing out a large spiral wheel that was as dark as ink in his hands, bursting with endless light and heat, and razing everything he saw. One was not influenced by Asura Chakra, one lived in harmony with Kurama since childhood, one received modern compulsory education since childhood, and the other watched the entire "Naruto". A different Naruto story. (i did not create this, just fixed some grammar https://comrademao.com/novel/let-the-world-feel-pain/)

Noah Carter, a seventeen years old teen, who joins The Royal High School after being homeschooled for his whole life because of his blindness, finds himself a mystery man whom he falls in love with...

Author: Plutos Translator: ​CatLovesTowels (Me) DESCRIPTION: When I opened my eyes, I was a princess! But why does it have to be a princess in this romance novel who has the fate of death from her own blood related father! If I want do live, I will have to stay completely away of his sight. However... "Since when did this kind of scumbag started living in my castle?" Not a single drop of blood nor tear to drop, that cruel and cold emperor, Claude! Will Atanasia who has entered his eyes survive? "I... What should I do......" _______ Author: Plutos This story is originally from the Author Plutus Credits to the owner and to the translator. ♥️

She finally was forced to death by Winson,the man she loved most,When he found the truth, she was gone forever, Rebirth, she gave up this man, trashed the woman who made her lost her child, but that scum chased her even all his life

A noob director unexpectedly returned to Hollywood in 1986, and began his legendary journey to take control of the world’s largest film and television industry center step by step....