What should I pay attention to when writing a novel?

English is not my first language so please take care of me and if you find mistakes in it tell me I fix it as soon as possible. Max Winchester died due to an "accident" while reading the novel after his death he meet God who allowed him to travel through and do whatever he think best but on condition to make Protagonist's life miserable. He also gives him the strongest system [Netori system] that help him steal Protagonists Woman, Chances, Luck, etc Why does God want to make that Protagonist's life miserable? And why [Netori system] given to the max let's find out. (English will get better after chapter 38.) I don't own a book cover, I find it online, If creator wants me to change it just message me, I will remove it.

Lee Fei is a normal 30-year-old man who has a good job as a librarian at the National University in China. He is an avid reader and has always read everything, including BL and GL, even though he declares himself 100% straight. He died just like that. There was no truck. There was no car accident. No deadly disease. Lee Fei reincarnated and transmigrated to the world of the book he had read days before he died. Unfortunately, a BL Dark Book. The worst, he transmigrated as an insignificant side character! Lee Fei became Emery Darcy, who is the third child of a powerful duke. Your life should be full of wealth and happiness, right? Unfortunately, Emery Darcy followed the path of an exorcist! Yes, Emery Darcy is an Exorcist Bishop! To make the irony of his situation worse, this side character had a worse fate than the villain. What an injustice! As the knowledge of the plot of this world, Lee Fei intends to return to the home of his rich family and live a good life! So, what if he has divine powers and MANA from nature? He just wants a rich and peaceful life! Ehhhh? Is the MC making a honey trap for me? Is ML no longer a possessive demon, but a tsundere that is following me? Is the fallen archangel a shameless voyeur who spies on me even in the bath? A guardian knight who thinks I'm the reincarnation of the god of nature? Stay away from me, I just want a peaceful life! Does apocalypse come far? No matter, I'm rich enough to protect myself! Let's have a happy and rich life as a good nobleman should be. NOTE: 1. R 18 2. Chapter Auxiliary with the main characters of the harem so far; 3. Harem Romance 4. Follow my Ko-fi for news and weekly calendars: https://ko-fi.com/post/Calendar-1001--1601-L4L27V5L9 and Ko-fi.com/take_the_moon. Thanks for your support in the 2021. Hope we're together in 2022 too.

[MATURE CONTENT] Sometimes we think we have life all figured out, till love shows. We set our eyes on our goals, so much that we refuse to be distracted, until someone steps in and we need a whole new plan. ~~~~~ Eun-Sun, a petite and beautiful girl who has a crazy temper and a huge load of pride to go with it, has her life completely planned out. All she needed in life was a good paying job to take care of her drug addicted mother, achieve her dream of being the design director of the country's most leading real estate company and also look for her 10 years missing father. Her first rule: Never owe a debt. Second rule: Never accept help from people, they'll always ask for a refund. What happens when she gets hit by the cold and aloof president of PK corporation, Lee Dan, and not only did this accident break her first rule it also broke the second. What happens when the aloof President finds something interesting for the first time and begins to look forward in claiming a debt owed by her? Did she ask for interest? He'll surely grant her wish. ........ Excerpt "Just let me court me you. You're delaying the whole process of courting you by being difficult to me." He told her as he tucked a stray strand behind her ear. "But what if I don't want you to?" She asked back. "Then I'll court you the nonetheless." Dan-Han shamelessly declared. In this relationship he wasn't giving her much of a choice. It was either, "You love me or pay your debt with your heart." He added. ********* P.s.: The story might be a bit slow at initial chapters, but that will change. You might not like FL at beginning chapters because she is fiesty but you'll get to LOVE her. Please support this book with your votes, comments and reviews and also add it to your libraries. I promise it will be worth your time. Also check out my other book also: When You are Mine. Thank you. *Muah*

"A Villainess should be strong," she thought as she vaporized an entire lake. The day Estelle Clareste was born, she already had the memories of Kirisaki Reina, a 21-year-old woman living in modern Japan. From a Villainous Duke's daughter, to the world's leader, and suddenly a Goddess?! Estelle's past, was it as simple as she first thought? Or was there something more lurking behind? Will she achieve her goals, or will she meet her downfall before that? -Photo not mine, I found it on Pinterest ^^-

Dropped. Don't read this. *** Various monsters came out from mysterious gates that appeared all over the world. Along with this incident, humans also gained power and were called hunters. Radmilo Laiv is a hunter with the power to control time. He spent his life serving the world government and becoming a hero. However, he was killed because his power was considered a threat to the government. It was a stroke of luck that Radmilo could return to the past because of his powers. In this life, he doesn’t want to be a hero anymore. Should he play the evil role and become a villain? *** The cover is mine, commissioned by @erminea_ on IG 暂停。

Mikhail is breaking up with his girlfriend. Out of heartbreak, he brought all games and food in the store and swore to not coming out of his room until he finished all the games. After one year, he finished all the games but after he coming out what he found the world is already on its end. "Ahahaha, you must be kidding with me right? This must be a dream!" Unfortunately no Mikhail this is not. Follow Mikhail on his journey with his grimoire! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Note: (NEET- Not in Education, Employment or Training aka Unemployed) The cover picture is only temporary and it is not mine. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Daily updates 1 chapter/day for sure! if I am busy and don't have a time to update today then tomorrow I will updates 2 chapters! If you'd like to support this story, considering buying the author a coffee: https://ko-fi.com/godadi Or support me at : https://www.patreon.com/godadi 500 Power Stones = 1 Bonus Chapter on weekend 650 Power Stones = 2 Bonus Chapters on weekend 800 Power Stones = 3 Bonus Chapters on weekend 1000 Power Stones = 5 Bonus Chapters on weekend Join my discord : https://discord.gg/xTmjGyF ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------