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When I was writing my novel, the actions were not very clear, so I wanted to ask if there were any good passages. If possible, please give me more.

2024-09-10 15:35
The range of movements in my novel is mainly about fists, kicks, and spears. You can directly send it to the answer. Thank you.
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When writing a novel, it was important to describe the actions so that the readers could more intuitively feel the emotions and atmosphere in the scene. Here are some examples of actions that I hope will be helpful. Charlotte raised her hand to cover her mouth to prevent herself from making a sound. Although her movements were small, the other party could feel her nervousness. Jenissa quickly raised her leg and kicked at the man. Her legs were very strong, and the man stood firm the moment she kicked him. Lin Feng quickly pounced on the other party and clenched his fists tightly, ready to receive the other party's attack. His movements were so fast that the other party could not react in time. Marina turned around and crashed into the wall. Her body quickly disappeared between the walls. Her movements were so fast that the other party could not react in time. Tom jumped up quickly. His movements were so light that the other party could not guard against him. He jumped up and waved the weapon in his hand, ready to attack the other party. The above are some examples of describing actions, hoping to give some inspiration. Of course, while describing the action, one also had to consider the development of the plot. The character's personality and emotions would make the entire action more lively and interesting.

My Identities Were All Exposed After I Was Pampered by Everyone at My Grandfather’s House!

My Identities Were All Exposed After I Was Pampered by Everyone at My Grandfather’s House!

# REALLADY # PRETENDTOBEAFOOL Qiao Yue was a premature baby. Her mother died early, while her father’s identity was unknown. Later, she was adopted by a mysterious big shot who created a mysterious multinational group for her with all the finance and material resources he had. The businesses under her name spanned various industries, and her assets were countless. Her subordinates were also famous big shots in their respective industries. As the person who had all of this behind the scenes, Qiao Yue had just turned eighteen and was about to return to her grandfather’s house. In fact, Qiao Yue’s mother was only the old man’s goddaughter, yet he treated her like his real daughter and brought her up as one. Because her grandfather couldn’t accept her mother’s relationship, she ran away from home with her lover and finally died outside. Before her mother died, she asked Qiao Yue to return to the Qiao family to repay their kindness, which was the reason for Qiao Yue to head back now. However, what awaited her was not a warm welcome ceremony, but four max-level big-shot elder brothers who extremely disliked her. The eldest brother was proficient in medicine. With a scalpel in hand, he could wrestle a person’s life back from death’s doors. The second brother had supernatural powers and was worth hundreds of billions. He had a creed all his life — there was nothing one couldn’t solve with money. If there was, then it meant you simply didn’t have enough money! The third brother was a celebrity superstar. Any action he made could go viral online. He was an artist whom everyone wanted to work with, and was also beloved by the entire nation! The fourth brother was the god of learning. With a smart brain and charming face, he was acknowledged as Prince Charming of the campus! At first, when the four brothers saw their “younger brother”, they were unhappy. Until… Eldest: “What? It’s a sister, not a brother?!” Second: “What? The world e-sports champion is actually Yueyue?!”Third: “What? Yueyue was the one who started my favorite sports car company?!”Fourth: “What? Yueyue has no blood relation to us?!”When they found out there were people pursuing Qiao Yue, her second brother’s face darkened. “Get lost! Yueyue is mine!” All her other brothers: ???
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When I woke up, I was in an Eroge World!

When I woke up, I was in an Eroge World!

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