Of course, I can give some advice to your friend's novel! Here are some suggestions that might be useful: 1. Decide on the theme and plot of the story. The theme of the story should reflect the feelings or thoughts your friend wants to express, and the plot should attract the reader's interest and push the story forward. 2. Leave enough room for the character to develop. The readers would usually put themselves in the characters in the novel, so it was very important to give the characters enough room to develop. Your friend can spend more time describing the character's inner thoughts, emotions, and growth. This will allow the reader to understand the character more deeply. Pay attention to writing and language. Your friend can use more vivid and vivid descriptions to make the characters and scenes more believable. At the same time, he had to pay attention to the use of language and try to avoid using overly stiff or unnatural vocabulary and expressions. 4. Keep the story coherent and complete. The plot and character development of the story should have a clear logical order and maintain the overall integrity. This way, the reader can more easily follow the story and better understand what your friend is trying to say. I hope these suggestions will be helpful to your friend. I wish the novel will be written better and better!