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The novel tells the reader a hair-raising story with a thrilling plot. Was this sentence wrong?

2024-08-27 03:32
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There was no grammar error in this sentence, but there might be some incongruity in the expression. Telling to the reader might be more accurately expressed as presenting to the reader because the story is usually created by the author rather than told by the reader himself. In addition, the thrilling plot can be expressed as the plot is tense and exciting or the plot is full of ups and downs because thrilling itself is an adjective phrase that may not be used accurately here. Therefore, the sentence could be changed to: The novel presents the reader with a hair-raising plot.

Is this destiny?

Is this destiny?

Sarah Hill is an introvert who does not want to attract attention. Other than mad coding skills, Sarah knows how to throw a punch. She believes that her biggest problem is the existence of the hacker Omega and her world flips upside-down when the most popular guy on campus approaches her. What does he want? Why her? (Ah, Sarah, that is only the beginning.) JoAnna Hill easily makes friends with her bubbly personality. Some call her a mad scientist, but she prefers ‘Dr. Hill’, because that is what she is. JoAnna is an excellent markswoman who can snipe out any target and she is wondering if her prince charming will ever come. Sophia Hill is the voice of reason, their pillar of support. She is a confident CEO who knows how to get what she wants. Sophia’s degree in law combined with amazing capabilities to analyze the situation and plan ahead make her the perfect strategist (to achieve a goal without ending up in jail). This is a story of three Hill sisters who are navigating through challenges while they uncover the complicated story behind their maternal side of the family. And their father is not a simple man either. Every sister is different, and so are their relationships. They all have in common: trust and belief that if they work together, anything is possible. Mature content! 18+ ***SPOILER? - START *** The story starts with a focus on the youngest sister (Sarah). After about 100 chapters, the oldest sister (Sophia) gets in the romantic spotlight. JoAnna finds herself pulled into romance last, at about 200 chapter mark. ***SPOILER? - END *** Excerpt from the novel... "Do you believe in destiny?", Sarah broke the silence. "Destiny?" Aiden didn't expect such a question. "Yes. The thing that is meant to happen, and there is nothing you can do to prevent it. And when it does happen, everything feels right." "Why would you ask me such a thing?" "Until a few weeks ago I would say that there is no such thing as destiny. That we are all masters of our lives and that everything depends on our actions, or lack of it. But I can't help but wonder: why did I not push you away? ... Why does it feel like everything will be OK as long as we are together? ... You are a piece of me that I never knew was missing. Is this destiny?" "Mmm... if that is destiny, then I approve it.", Aiden lightly kissed Sarah's shoulder and rested his chin on it. --- 1st WARNING!!! Contains descriptions of intimate scenes. If you are not comfortable with that, don’t read it! --- 2nd WARNING!!! This is my first novel! :) --- ***** I own the cover. ***** Check out my other novels: * "Accident Prone" * "Amara - Reunion" * "The Alpha's Bride" * "The Supreme Alpha"
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I Was Caught Up in a Hero Summoning, but That World Is at Peace

I Was Caught Up in a Hero Summoning, but That World Is at Peace

It all happened so abruptly. After finally grasping my situation, I found myself in an entirely different world. Looking around, I noticed others in the same predicament… Could this possibly be one of those Hero developments? Was there a tyrannical Demon Lord needing extermination, or would I be tossed into the maelstrom of war? Whatever it was, I was afraid. I never wanted to be a Hero. I don’t want to harm another…… Ignore the nonsense I was spouting; there was nothing to fret over. The Demon Lord was slain a thousand years ago, and 800 years had passed since the last war. The nobles didn’t treat us summoned like tr*sh; instead, we were kindly cared for. The Demons have been on good terms with Humans for some time now. Dangers, such as monsters, were being taken care of by the Guild and the Order of Knights. What’s more surprising is the fact that I wasn’t even a hero! Instead, I was unintentionally summoned! It also turns out that this world was a world in which the three races, the Spirit World’s Magical Races, the Celestial World’s Divine Races, and the Mortal World’s Human Races, are kind neighbours. Here, everyone lives a peaceful and fulfilling life. In summary, this other world was――at peace. What’s my plan for the future? For my limited stay here, I will live this world to its fullest; going on a cultural exchange, sightseeing, then, after experiencing the festival that is only held once every ten years, …… I shall safely return home. However, despite my lust for a peaceful last year before returning, this planet’s heavyweights have begun amassing around me, and……
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I Love Destroying Worlds' Plot [BL]

I Love Destroying Worlds' Plot [BL]

Hei Anjing is an extreme type of person. Mischievous and loves to play around with annoying people. A Devil may care attitude when in his good mood but horribly terrifying when angered. A cold hearted person with an unparalleled intelligence, who treated others as entertainment. A Nethergod who was supposed to be a Lord that governed the Netherworld as a ruler. Cruelty and Mercilessness are his nature. But despite that his heart only beats for one person. His love, feelings and obsession are for his alone. One whose memories were sealed for some reason. While the other lost his right as a lord and his soul fragments were scattered all over different worlds. Then they've met in those worlds. Bullying the heaven's beloved children and destroying the plots of the worlds creating endless chaos. With both the MC and ML having some problems in the brain and are psychopaths. Will the world end or not? "I will chase and capture you, over and over again. Imprisoning you in my embrace. Until there will be no gaps for you to escape anymore. You are my obsession and my everything." "Capture me. Find me. As long as you do, I will stay by your side until the end. There is no need for you to know what I did for you." A hellish ride of two shameless and evil people. The true meaning of their relationship was hidden within those sealed memories. An action packed journey with thrilling and full of suspense events which you wouldn't like to miss! NO ONE 17 AND UNDER. You have been warned. Credits for the Char. photo: Natalie Riverson (Pinterest)
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Revise the wrong sentence. They discussed the plot of the novel in unison

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2024-09-13 15:06

They discussed the plot of the novel in unison.

Revise the sentence of the wrong sentence

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2024-09-10 23:56

I'm not sure what sentence you want me to change. Please provide more specific information so that I can help you better.

Was " writing a novel " a wrong sentence?

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2024-09-03 12:16

Not writing a novel was not a bad sentence. This is a complete sentence that represents the name of an action or process. In Chinese, it was common to place a verb before a verb, such as "write","compose","compose", etc. This usage can express the effect of a verb on a verb, making the sentence more fluent and natural.

What are some of the most hair - raising horror stories from '100 hair raising horror stories'?

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2024-11-25 00:51

There might be a story of a cursed object. In '100 hair raising horror stories', perhaps there's a doll that brings misfortune to whoever owns it. People who possessed it had nightmares every night and soon fell ill. It had an eerie look and seemed to watch people even when they moved it to different rooms.

And the plot was thrilling?

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2024-09-14 20:55

😋I recommend the following novel to you: - "The wind blows and the flowers fall all over the mountains." - Ocean Love - The Star Road and You - "A Warm Wedding" - "The General's Family's Farmer Girl" These novels were not heart-wrenching, and there were no mistresses. The plot was relaxed and interesting, suitable for daily relaxation reading. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

Revise the wrong sentence on the original sentence

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2024-09-22 20:30

What kind of novel do you like?

Correct the wrong sentence.

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2024-09-22 14:11

Which sentence would you like to change?

Correct the wrong sentence?

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2024-09-20 14:26

He fell in love with her. He found that she was in love with him.

Correct the wrong sentence?

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2024-09-20 14:19

May I ask what wrong sentence do you need me to correct?

Correct the wrong sentence.(2)

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2024-09-20 14:13

Of course, the original word could be modified like this: We should respect their opinions. This modification was in line with the common language design of modern literature to make the sentence more fluent and easy to understand.

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