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I'm sorry, my answer may not be accurate enough. According to what I know," Carefree Travel " is not the author's new book but a work that has been published for a long time.

The male protagonist in the novel," Dangerous Eroding Feelings ", finally understood that his feelings were at the end of the novel. At the end of the novel, the male protagonist met a girl who had a similar experience with him. Only then could he truly understand and let go of his past feelings and start a new life. However, the ending was not perfect because the male protagonist still loved his ex-girlfriend, which made it difficult for him to get rid of the shadow of the past.

Magic school novels were school novels with magic as the theme. In the novels, students could use magic to carry out various activities such as fighting, solving puzzles, exploring, and so on. This type of novel often involved emotional elements such as friendship, love, and family. It might also have a fantasy adventure plot. His masterpieces included the Harry Potter series and the Lord of the Rings series.

I have a book that I recommend to you. It's called "The Return of the King of Online Games." It was an online game novel from before 2008. The main character had a hidden archer class. There was a limit to the number of deaths in the game, and the game could also reincarnate. The number of deaths would affect the reincarnation. I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

"The Song Dynasty's Female Punishment" is an ancient romance novel written by the author Bing Sanjia. The general plot of this novel is: "Song Wanqiu, the granddaughter of Song Ci, a criminal officer of the Southern Song Dynasty, followed her father, Song Canghai, as a coroner for the sake of her family's honor. She hoped that one day she could be a criminal officer like her grandfather. Therefore, Song Wanqiu disguised herself as a male and solved many strange cases with the help of the two men, Hua Buyu and Qin Yunchu. In the end, she realized her dream and became a female judge of the Southern Song Dynasty. At the same time, she, Hua Buyu, and Qin Yunchu were engaged in a love struggle. quot;。 ---------------------------- 'Wanted by a Wealthy Family: Master Jing's Escaped Wife' was a modern romance novel written by the author, Wan Guichuan. The general plot of the novel was: It was rumored that the cold-blooded Second Master Jing's weakness was a peerless beauty. After three years of protection, Jing Si appeared alone in front of everyone on the day of the engagement party and announced that his bride had died in an accident. A few months later, the usually low-key Shen family announced the return of their daughter, Shen Yueyin. At the banquet, she smiled coquettishly."I've long heard of Second Master Jing's great name. Now that I've seen you today, you really live up to your reputation." "I've heard a lot about you?" Jing Si smiled coldly and approached her."Miss Shen is really forgetful. It's only been a few months. Have you forgotten everything?" Her expression changed. "Shen Yueyin, I want you to pay back everything you owe me!" He hated her to the bone and was angry at her heartlessness, but he was deeply immersed in her and could not extricate himself. Shen Yueyin, I will only give you my love once. I only have one heart. This time, do you want it? ---------------------------- Humble Beauty was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Shi ZhaoL. The general plot of the novel was: In the tenth year of Daye, the emperor died, and the two prime ministers of Shen and Wei assisted the young emperor to succeed the throne. On the night two years later, sparks flew from the collision of swords and sabers, illuminating Chang 'an as if it was daytime. The entire Shen family had generations of merits but ended up as a traitor. When she opened her eyes again, Shen Ruohua had become a poor girl from a fallen family… ---------------------------- "The Shen Family Has a Daughter" was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Yuxue Qifei. The general plot of this novel was: The married life that Fifth Shen Young Lady who looked cold and aloof imagined, They would grow flowers, talk about the zither, and write poems. And help my husband raise a few beautiful concubines, But this passerby husband, You said our predestined fate in our previous life was already predestined, How could someone else interfere... ---------------------------- "Exclusive of Your Gentleness" was a short story written by the author, Sai Mengxue. The general plot of this novel was: Shen Qingqiu's most helpless, yet most fortunate thing in his life was being pestered by Jing Zhan. 1. "Jing Zhan, you disgust me." "If I can still make you feel disgusted, that means I'm not bad." Second, "I was forced to be with you. Let's break up, okay?" "Not good!" Third, "Jing Zhan, this rock of mine seems to have been heated up by you." Jing Zhan: "If you like it, then say so. What kind of rock is it that's been covered by a blanket? Tsk." Uh…this is a sweet story. The male protagonist only likes the female protagonist. As for the female protagonist, do you think she dares to like anyone else? Hehe… ---------------------------- "The Cold Wind at Night" was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Yu Hua Ji. The general plot of this novel was: "Young Lady Shen, that Young Master is here again!" Shen Wanwan raised her eyebrows."Again? Do you think this is an inn? Come and go as you please?" ...... "Since Wanwan wants me to stay so much, then I won't leave!" “......”。 ---------------------------- The book "Spring in Jin Garden" was an ancient romance novel written by Ye Mo. The general plot of the novel was: Shen Shuyan,"Han Yan, how about a Heavenly Book as your betrothal gift?" Han Yan: Hmph, what if I say that I want to take in both Tian Shu and you? Xiao Chenyuan,"Haha…Han Yan, if you don't want to marry me, I'll marry you…" Xiao Chenyuan, you… * Qin Yin was unhappy, his chess skills were not good, and his painting was sloppy. He was not afraid! I still have another skill-- ---------------------------- "Golden Fairy" was a fantasy romance novel written by the author, Ming Yue Bing Lun. The general plot of this novel was: Before entering the capital, Song Zhiyu thought that Beiliang's capital should be prosperous and peaceful, but after entering the capital, Song Zhiyu realized that under this seemingly peaceful grand plan, there were undercurrents of power disputes, and it was impossible to guard against conspiracies and open schemes. Song Zhiyu,[It's really a headache. The best strategy is to escape. Run away!] Shen Chi said: Your benefactor's life-saving grace, I will sacrifice my life to repay you. Since you're leaving, why don't you bring me along? Song Zhiyu,"I'm scary. I eat people!" Shen Chi: Take me back, fry me as you please. … If you need me to save your life. Then, I'm willing to share my life with you. ---------------------------- "The Beauty of the World" was an ancient romance novel written by the author, Xirui Qingqing. The general plot of this novel was: The daughter of the Minister of Rites of the Northern Song Dynasty. She was intelligent since childhood and was eloquent. In her previous life, her best friend had stolen her boyfriend, and in this life, she had snatched back the man that should have belonged to her from her sister. It was not easy to have a few sweet days, but he accidentally got involved with the palace fight. From the prime minister's young mistress who lived in luxury to the homeless road of escape in the chaos of war, to the support of the royal family, to the power of the world…Was this dream-like adventure a coincidence or was it deliberately arranged by someone… Prosperity was like a dream. When the curtain of her youth slowly fell, what did she finally get and what did she lose? ---------------------------- "The Big Boss's Movie Queen's Wife Is Beautiful and Savage" was a modern romance novel written by the author, Hua Chao Man Yue. The general plot of this novel was: Tang Zhixi is the illegitimate daughter of the Song family? He grew up in the countryside and never went to school? The Song family even claimed that they would never acknowledge her? ... When Tang Zhixi's identity was exposed, the Song family immediately prepared a family recognition banquet. "Is your Song family even worthy?" Tang Zhixi rejected him directly. … The Third Master of the Imperial Capital had actually fallen in love with a wild girl who had never even gone to school. It was said that she was even doted on in the palm of her hand. "My wife is not simple," Ye San said proudly as he shocked the entire capital city. ... Ye Hanzhi never believed in love at first sight until he met Tang Zhixi… There was a beautiful woman in the north who could topple a country and a city… * Tang Zhixi liked to wear dresses, but later…Ye Hanzhi's shirt cufflinks were all the same color as her dress.

The short anime with an ancient theme that met the requirements were: << Nine Songs of the Heavenly Path >> tells the story of a love story between a Taoist priest and a young girl. The male protagonist is a monk and the female protagonist is a Taoist priest. This anime had a beautiful style and a very attractive storyline. " Fuyao ": This was an ancient fantasy anime that told the love story between the female lead Fuyao and the male lead Wuji. The male lead was a Taoist priest while the female lead was a mysterious existence. The plot of this anime was full of ups and downs, and the special effects were also very beautiful and loved by the audience. " Sword Comes ": This is an anime with the theme of ancient Chinese swordsmanship. It tells the love story between a swordsman named Chen Pingan and a woman named Chen Pingan. The male lead was a Taoist priest while the female lead was a mysterious woman. The anime's style was fresh and natural, and the storyline was also very fascinating and loved by the audience.

I recommend "The Malicious Empress Dowager's Husband, Yao Rao", an ancient romance novel. The female protagonist was cold, ruthless, enchanting, and charming. She showed no mercy to men. Her methods were cruel and bloody, making people's hair stand on end. She had transmigrated to become the Empress Dowager and fought back against the concubines and courtiers, causing the harem to never have peace again. Hurry up and take a look! I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

The novel I recommend to you is 'The Crazy Beauty of the Heavenly Axiom'. It was a novel written by the author, Zi Yuehuang, about a Xianxia Legend-Modern Cultivation novel. It was about a cultivator who was reborn into the entertainment industry and became a female celebrity with countless haters. But when she arranged her divinations, it would become interesting and magical. If you like topics like cultivation and becoming a celebrity, then this book is definitely not to be missed! I hope you like this fairy's recommendation. Muah ~😗

An example of a romance novel title is as follows: "Meeting in a Cafe" Chance Encounter " An Encounter in a Cafe " Meeting You "Meeting in a Cafe" The titles of these books might fit the story you described. I hope it can be of help to you!

There are many good romance novels. Here are a few classic ones: 1 "Why the Silent Flute" 2."A slight smile is very beautiful." 3 " Chu Qiao's Legend " "Three Lives Three Lives Ten Miles Peach Blossom" 5 "Thousand Bones of Flowers" These were all classic romance novels with beautiful writing and plots that were deeply loved by readers. I hope you will like it!