Badges 6
Moments 22
Umm, hello?! Why would it be a joke? More like the Moon goddess is trying to save you from making a huge mistake. You should be thanking her for your mate showing up before you married a chosen(aka forced) mate. Engagements, easy to break off. Most wolves revere the mate bond.
'Moon Goddess,' I thought, 'what kind of cruel joke are you playing at?'
Rogue Mate Of The Alpha
Fantasy · Miya_Grace
But Jorge was already told to leave and not come back when she was in the old room. These paragraphs make it read like that never happened.
"I was doing as you told me, alpha. She was being difficult, so I sought out new methods."
Rogue Mate Of The Alpha
Fantasy · Miya_Grace
Glowing some sort of Vegas? What??!
They were glowing some sort of Vegas, dark gold color with a cedar red slit in the middle, giving the wolf an intimidating look.
HER ALPHA'S CARNAL SINS
Fantasy · C3e_Jay
Right?! Way to not know what’s going on.
Alpha Damien had given him a piece of his mind this morning which Included getting a fist aimed at his jaw. Marcy was his little sister after all, and he couldn't risk seeing her hurt; especially not by her own husband.
HER ALPHA'S CARNAL SINS
Fantasy · C3e_Jay
AMY. her name is not ARMY
"Your room?" Jenny nodded her head. "Okay, let's go to your room then." She motioned for Army to follow.
Sold To An Alpha
Fantasy · AngelLily
Soft blemish free skin? What happened to the scars and marks from her years of abuse?
Her soft, blemish-free skin, the smooth shallows of her body, and how she molded around me as if the gods made her for me–
Sold as the Alpha King's Breeder
Fantasy · Alice Knightsky
**slender. Not slander.
My eyes closed, and everything about him rose up in my mind. His slander and powerful fingers that brushed over my skin, his deep voice that rang over my ear, his cold and musky scent that surrounded me, and his piercing and clear blue eyes that locked on me…
Sold as the Alpha King's Breeder
Fantasy · Alice Knightsky
Qs? **was
Despair and fear swept over me. It qs like in the deepest nightmare, I could only make the faintest sound with all my might.
Sold as the Alpha King's Breeder
Fantasy · Alice Knightsky
You mean Ann launching at Ada? right?!
　　He knew she was going to launch herself at Ann before she did it.
Alpha Nocturne's Contracted Mate
Urban · A E Randell
So, Brad’s story is still it was a one time thing. But when confronted earlier by Maeve, shes says she blocked the pain many times… So was he banging more than just Ada? Definitely lying about one time only? Blind drunk, but it was Ada’s name he called. So he knew who he was doing. And is Ada really pregnant? Cuz if it really was just one time a few days prior, she wouldn’t know if she was pregnant. Inconsistent.
ch 37 CHAPTER 37 The Unwilling Alpha
Alpha Nocturne's Contracted Mate
Urban · A E Randell
Ling Vials??? Really? King Vilas has enough grammatical errors around him to kill the story.
Neither did Ling Vials continue this overreaction, nor did Daniel let things much affect him. But he did have another talk to do.
His Witch Queen
Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
Sought should be sort.
What sought of madness was this?
The Dragon King's Chosen Bride
Fantasy · Phinix
Ah, another Romina instead of Belladonna. At least edit the name of your MAIN character correctly.
Romina looked away from her, her eyes onto the warriors instead. She started searching through the guards for the Dragon King, so that she would know whose attention she didn't want to draw.
The Dragon King's Chosen Bride
Fantasy · Phinix
Why would she knock on the door of her own house? Wouldn’t she be getting out her key to unlock the door?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 - How "Not" To Get Chosen
The Dragon King's Chosen Bride
Fantasy · Phinix
Accomplishing should be accompa nying
King Vilas and King Almen sat opposite each other. While their sons were accomplishing them in this dinner, who was seated beside them.
His Witch Queen
Fantasy · Amaira_Knight
It would make you the kind that found his fated mate. 🙄
If there was one thing my father taught me from an early age, it was that an alpha never went back on his word. If I was to take back my promise to my fiancée, what kind of alpha would that make me?
Rogue Mate Of The Alpha
Fantasy · Miya_Grace