Wasn't it 500,000? thats Five Hundred Thousand it needs another zero for five million.
How could he have outsmarted me and won five million?
Movies · INDRATH
This is an average joe? maybe before the 90's? Even that is arguable due to hippy era. So maybe before the 70s?
I am a 30-year-old virgin who had countless girlfriends throughout life but never went to bed with.
Anime & Comics · IMMORT_AL
While a good story, is the person who reincarnated as Naruto also rather young? They seem to have a child like thought process.
ch 0 6 Chapter - 6 ( Butterfly Effect!!)
Anime & Comics · AuthorBeast
A lot of spacing issues in this chapter
ch 67 Apology and 'Good' Night!*
Anime & Comics · Kaoski
You could make the Ancient One busy with another invasion. Maybe something similar to like in the MCU when Loki invades Earth. Or if it doesn't harm the later half of the story too much -since this is an au-, the Ancient One could be in the fight where she dies.
Remain as Dimensional Threat.
Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
Honestly I prefer your translation and edits to the original mtl I was reading of this. Though a Question. Once you make so many changes from the original where it makes it difficult to coincide with the mtl will you shift it into your own personal story or do some sort of short plot to make it work like a inverse retcon?
ch 29 C26 - Luke, a Hero?!
Anime & Comics · TheWandaShip
He hated dragons so much he attempted multiple wars of genocide. (I have read a lot of fanfiction and that may be from a fanfiction but I seem to remember the scene actually mentioned or reffered to in the anime.)
Maria feels little respect for him. She nodded and said "seems like he was a good god." Sora nodded and agreed with her. He really was a good god in DXD where everyone is selfish and does things that will be beneficial to them.
Anime & Comics · Slime_king
I found this chapter jarring with the just being rude the the girl for no reason. If his parents hear this it would bite him in the butt for being a bully if we ignore that he can rewind time. I say this because they know he has no issues with females.
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Well, at least she's hot.
Anime & Comics · LordOrpheus
I am just going to imagine that says Lucas but I dont even know how to translate the last name.
Xicas Zonve was born as a normal human in a normal world.
Anime & Comics · Void_of_outer_box
What happened to these? He is simply reincarnated without them ever mentioned.
"Exactly, but this time you will get six wishes from me"
Anime & Comics · Ibananito
Should be something along the lines that "Such concerns are unworthy of his attention."
Upon hearing Raizel's apology, Frankenstein looked back at him with a hint of worry in his eyes. "Master, you are not unworthy of such concerns," he replied earnestly. Raizel remained expressionless as he gave a slight nod in acknowledgment of Frankenstein's words.
Movies · AmouxCreationsX
Without the double negative. Frankenstein said that Raizel was worthy of such concerns which implies he should have already known and not done so.
Upon hearing Raizel's apology, Frankenstein looked back at him with a hint of worry in his eyes. "Master, you are not unworthy of such concerns," he replied earnestly. Raizel remained expressionless as he gave a slight nod in acknowledgment of Frankenstein's words.
Movies · AmouxCreationsX
How would they know this?
They were shocked to see such a huge ship in such a place. Navy people were going haywire due to the appearance of an unknown ship capable of destroying them if needed. Ignoring the people, Ash steered it to his next Island.
Anime & Comics · Mad_Crazer
Is this a summary of a long conversation? Because as it stands it sounds like Julene is rather stupid for an intelligent ai for asking this question rather than bringing it up when pertinent.
She asked if he would make a suitable body for her. He said he will. She said she will not ever leave his body. If they want to talk each other face to face, then it will be inside his Soul Core Universe. And he was fine with that. Just think about it. A Waifu only he can see and enjoy is a special treat.
Anime & Comics · Mad_Crazer
What?????
She asked if he would make a suitable body for her. He said he will. She said she will not ever leave his body. If they want to talk each other face to face, then it will be inside his Soul Core Universe. And he was fine with that. Just think about it. A Waifu only he can see and enjoy is a special treat.
Anime & Comics · Mad_Crazer
This just read like Azazel is villainous and mind whammied Jin like the devils do to Issei's parents.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Azazel
Anime & Comics · Iguana32
I will give it another try. Maybe after getting some sleep. Like I said though, apart from the style I didn't have much of an issue with the story with the exception of that one remark about the chakra and the time skip. Which I could argue with myself to say is negligible since you could always explain that later. The two best first person points of view (which is what you were using but in my opinion a poor style) are in the perspective of a nostalgic MC telling the story similar to How I Met Your Mother or written like the MC is writing a letter to someone or a writing in their Diary.
Naruto- Amaterasu
Anime & Comics · IMMORT_AL