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So, remember that time I went all Godzilla on your book? Yeah, I totally owe you an apology for that one. My bad! Turns out my filter went on vacation and left me to fend for myself. Seriously though, upon further reflection (and a much-needed chill pill), I gotta hand it to you –your book is solid. Seriously, you've got skills. I even took a second dip into your book, and let me tell you, it's like diving into a pool of awesome sauce. You've got some serious talent, my friend! But hey, let's not dwell on the past. I'm here to rebuild bridges, not burn 'em! From now on, I promise to think before I speak... well, most of the time anyway. 😜 And hey, just a little reminder from your friendly neighborhood pal: don't let the negativity get you down! We're all just trying to navigate this crazy world of creativity together, right? Anyway, lets keep supporting each other in our respective literary pursuits,

Yeah, I totally owe you an apology for that one. My bad! Turns out my filter went on vacation and left me to fend for myself. Seriously though, upon further reflection (and a much-needed chill pill), I gotta hand it to you –your book is solid. Seriously, you've got skills. I even took a second dip into your book, and let me tell you, it's like diving into a pool of awesome sauce. You've got some serious talent, my friend! But hey, let's not dwell on the past. I'm here to rebuild bridges, not burn 'em! From now on, I promise to think before I speak... well, most of the time anyway. 😜 And hey, just a little reminder from your friendly neighborhood pal: don't let the negativity get you down! We're all just trying to navigate this crazy world of creativity together, right? Anyway, lets keep supporting each other in our respective literary pursuits.

ch 269, bro you gotta be kidding me right, all that planning and you just throw it away?? Bruuhhhhhh, srry not my cup of tea, when you see mc getting abused for litteray no reason, why did he not call over fredric when he cleary had time and knew what would happen just naahhh.

I dont get it, why does the mc have to take abuse when his grandfather is one of the strongest characters in the story? Why is the grandfather so scared of the rest of the family. If the dare resist or complain why not slaughter them wtf?????

Talking about ch 241. And i just want to say that i am a bit harsh with the critique, and just want to say that while there may be inconsistences (very few) those do not define the incredible book you have written. I trully enjoy reading it . In retrosepct i just want to say to you the author that you are doing an amazing job and do not lose confindence in yourself and you ability to write. Its just that when you are immersed in the book you can get heated real quick. So dont take the critque that you get to personal as most if not all come from passionate readers who enjoy your story. Its almost like when something bad (or not enjoyable) happens many will complain but when you are doing an amazing job, there is often no praise (if you take me as an example ahha). So keep up.

Talking about ch 241. And i just want to say that i am a bit harsh with the critique, and just want to say that while there may be inconsistences (very few) those do not define the incredible book you have written. I trully enjoy reading it . In retrosepct i just want to say to you the author that you are doing an amazing job and do not lose confindence in yourself and you ability to write. Its just that when you are immersed in the book you can get heated real quick. So dont take the critque that you get to personal as most if not all come from passionate readers who enjoy your story. Its almost like when something bad (or not enjoyable) happens many will complain but when you are doing an amazing job, there is often no praise (if you take me as an example ahha). So keep up.[img=recommend]

I will say, much of the criticism about this arc is valid. For example, the bad time skips, leaving many unexplained aspects. And most importantly the nerf. In my opinion much of this story and its sucsess is predicated upon the fact that the mc is calculativ, smart and strong. And the fact that he sometimes makes stupid choices like this one with no considerations is tottaly out of charactor, and creates a paradox. This makes the story not make sense logic-wise. Hence it makes the reader feel stiffiled, irritated, becuase it feels as if you (the author) is forcing it, by bourdening the mc ( for something that is not so important, relatively speaking) and this makes it especially bad because since those who read this are rooting for the mc. I understand why some people might find it vexing reading him going through so much trouble when he could logically bully the entire world with his strength. You tried to justify the reason, (and i qoute" people make stupid mistakes"), but this is not good enough. Take this as a learning experience.

Why is the mc so carless with people he trust and cant he just develop slowly. He is rushing in to powerfull people when he is so weak. Always dependent on the whims of other people. Thats just plain stupid. Why do you write it like this?

Why is the mc so carless with people he trust and cant he just develop slowly. He is rushing in to powerfull people when he is so weak. Always dependent on the whims of other people. Thats just plain stupid. Why do you write it like this?

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