Sacul_8234

16d

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I really liked the beginning and idear behind it. However the harem part destroyed the strory for me. Romance ok! I could even overlook the fact that it is between 12/13 year olds and an adult(mind) even thought it is creepy. But the author had to take all females in the Potterverse and pushes it to the front instead of the story development itself. Also the MC is way to powerful in every way possible and that to fast. The translator makes a good job and I hope he translates some other work in the future. Maybe not a harem one ;)

The Strongest Dark Lord

Movies · Mysteryon

Sacul_8234

4mth

Commented

Good luck

I'll definitely update you if I pass my interview on the 28th, as they will declare the results on the same day. Truthfully, I have the skills for the job role, but the issue is confidence. I've had this type of interview before, in February, for a different role, but the process was similar. I think I failed that interview because of my lack of confidence. This time, I'm pretty fired up and will try to pass. The process will take 5-7 days, and if I fail on day 1, I won't be able to proceed to the next round.

Bleach: Shadows of Destiny

Anime & Comics · LazyXalien

Sacul_8234

4mth

Commented

Merry Christmas

ch 158 Chapter XXI: Onwards To The Rift!

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Sacul_8234

5mth

Commented

Make an OC. Allmost all fanfic chose Ashoka or other Masters like Shaak Ti. However most of them have a personality but an OC can be what you want them to be. Also why are most of them aliens? 😅

ch 28 not a chapter

Reborn into Star Wars without a system

Movies · Wingzer0

Sacul_8234

6mth

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F

[Let us have a minute of silence, for the loss of an innocent soul.]

Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]

Anime & Comics · Maerry

Sacul_8234

10mth

Commented

I wish you swift recovery.

ch 88 Chapter 87

Good or Bad, Does it matter? (Harry Potter Fanfic)[TN]

Book&Literature · Lucifer09

Sacul_8234

10mth

Commented

welcome back

ch 41 41: The Dueling Club

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Book&Literature · NyanTa

Sacul_8234

11mth

Commented

I wish you swift recovery

ch 116 CORN IS BACKKKK!!!

Fairy Tail: Shinigami

Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER

Sacul_8234

1yr

Commented

A smart Sith? I like that!

ch 23 Chapter 22: fat bastard

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Movies · Darkest_Sage

Sacul_8234

1yr

Commented

Do we really need her? He has more than enough woman with out her. Dont really see the appeal to include her in the harem.

If he died his hot-as-sin mother would no longer like Aerion, she in canon is dead now but it never said how or why just like Rhaena so I just kept them alive and chalked it up to butterfly effect. But if Aerion cuts down Daemon here while they are both still 'young' lots of things will need changing.

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

Sacul_8234

1yr

Commented

Up to this point the story is well done. I really hope you dont go over the top like you did in your other Fanfiction. Throwing every woman and family member at the mc ruins the story. I dropped your other fiction after he slept whith his aunts and mothers of his real loveintersts. I mean even Targaryens have some restrain and even more so, if they have more than enough potential partners among their agegroup who are more than willing to help him with his little problem and really like him. Sorry for the little runt but I really hate it when a good plot and lovestory is destroyed because the author has to throw all woman that exist at the mc. I am not a big Fan of harem and finding one that has great potential is really rare but in the end it is up to you.

ch 18 18 R18?

GOT/ASOIAF: Son of the Unworthy

Book&Literature · Pretending_Author

Sacul_8234

1yr

Commented

Sorry but i drop this. All was well. Not a big harem fan but til this last chapter and the one before i found it good but this was over the top and kind of forced. Liked the story and the setting.

ch 58 57 R18 part 2