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I liked it, although the mc seems very op, compared to other stories it seems good to me, also that it is not a harem adds points even if the romance is a bit rushed, well the whole story goes very fast, keep it up author. (Google translator)

The idea was fine at first but I realized that the mc is going to be weak and will have to be protected by his children, from what I understand, patriarchs or leaders in general are strong, intelligent or have some special ability. The system is one of the worst I've seen, I saw many comments that said it's realistic and when someone wanted the mc to be stronger and they asked me what's realistic about a baby being born in 2 weeks, I left it in chapter 22 I didn't want to keep wasting time (Google translator).

At the beginning it was fine but everything went to shit, the mc who is the most intelligent has the power to read the mind and influence it, it is supposed that he had everything planned for him to become stronger with a serum he created, but it seems that his super intelligence and his powers are useless, after he left for two months it seems that homelander replaced the mc because he stole a serum that made him more powerful, characters betrayed the mc, homelander made chaos until he stole Ryan, who was an important experimental subject for him, is supposed to be the smartest, he even has an artificial intelligence that had everything under control and he couldn't think that they were going to steal a serum that was in a Fucking safe, after this I couldn't take the mc seriously and even when he had already absorbed the serum he didn't even show up to stop homelander, you can't expect much from a fanfic but this is at the top of those who start off well and ruin it by forcing the plot. (google translator) xD

I love the fact that he doesn't Stupidly choose to help anyone who comes across him, that he has no mercy when it comes to his well-being and his hive etc, but have compassion sometimes. (google traductor)

disappointment someone op and reincarnated is Shit if it is not the mc, even with his talent and money he destroys the mc, and although he says that with the system later on he will be stronger than her practically not even lumus knows how to throw, where it is specified that she does not know how to throw either does he have a system?, not even the mc system knows who he is, I thought he would improve when he argued with bellatrix but it seems he is even afraid of rose, his revenges are just words, the fanfic is not for me there will be others who like it Not me.

why try to protect her if she is stronger than the mc, it seemed interesting to me before reading that no matter what the mc does he will not be stronger than his sister. (Google translator)

lo deje cuando dijo que otros iban a tener harem hasta ron, la historia es apresurada pero buena, aunque tiene muchas recompensas hubiera sido mejor una loteria op pero 1 cada año o algo asi, para que no tenga 3 años y el mc sea op, me hubiera gustado ver mas quizas vaya a otros mundos pero no me gusta cuando le dan mucho papel a personajes secundarios, y mas cuando quieren hacer sus parejas, bueno espero que mi opinion no se haya toma a mal.

lo deje a la mitad el protagonista me parece muy débil, un verdadero jefe de dragon ball, lo derrota con el 1% de su poder se que tiene 10 años pero tiene un maquina de deseos cada año, aunque ser muy fuerte es aburrido por lo menos déjalo ser mas fuerte que su tripulación, espero que mi opinión no se tome a mal.

pensé que iba a ser mejor con danmachi al final, pero es una mierd* no salí de los 10 capítulos por la calidad de escritura, los tartamudeos con comas, los párrafos gigantes que no se entienden, lo estúpido que es el mc fusionando un anillo de almacenamiento con un reloj y le costo 2 millones, después nerfeando el sistema porque la moneda se devalúa, las relaciones que va teniendo como shizuka que al segundo o tercer día ya le toca el dic*, se que es medio tonta pero no tanto, dijo que iba a arreglar los problemas gramaticales pero nunca lo hizo, y tengo una pregunta se supone que tiene el cuerpo de Cloud que es fuerte y todo eso, pero ¿porque se cansa corriendo junto con rei y saya? si se supone que tiene superfuerza no se debería cansar como los demás, bueno es solo una opinión espero que no se tome a mal.