He realised he made a mistake immediately and even said he regretted it.
Deputy Captain Verri's eyes dimmed, "Young man, honesty is a precious virtue. I don't want to discourage you, but the fact is--once you leave Northshire Abbey, I can't guarantee your safety. Moreover, Landor holds both noble and mage apprentice statuses, even the average noble wouldn't choose to go against him."
Others · Read_and_Chill
God there is so much author explanations and recaps that there is hardly an actual novel if you stripped it all away.
ch 0 5 5. Understanding the System.
Movies · TheRamenLord
I hate it when authors do this breaking the fourth wall thing, it's jarring and cringeworthy.
ch 0 4 4. A Horrifying Tale and Understanding the System.
Movies · TheRamenLord
Probably too late but divination would be perfect for mc, he can calculate all variables with his heightened intelligence.
ch 26 Chapter 26 – A Unique Trait
Fantasy · Railvas
I hate it when authors do this, if you're not going to post a chapter then don't post the chapter, Why make a notice like this, all it does is make me click thinking there's a new release and get annoyed when we see a message like this.
ch 88 CHAPTER 88 - BOOMTUBE, GET
Movies · QuackVader
You should try to improve your writing and actually write more than 4 chapters before dropping a story and then maybe people would be more willing to give you money for your "hobby".
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Merger of Souls
Video Games · Endless_Crow
I just don't think you're good/dedicated enough at writing to expect to be paid for your work.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: The Merger of Souls
Video Games · Endless_Crow
Don't listen to him author, it's a cool plot. I like how mc is able to rectify some of his "mistakes" and grow by taking in a disciple similar to him.
ch 76 Happiness, Father's Instinct and Departure
Anime & Comics · VeganMaster
I think it's fine, the author has created a completely original fanfic. Most harry potter fanfics follow the story religiously, he is only using the same universe.
"Perhaps he is not bad, but I don't like his look ... too good-natured, but I don't even want to imagine what is hidden behind this facade." Severus said, shaking his head.
Book&Literature · Lucifer09
Forgot about that, we haven't seen the ocean since the first chapter. I don't have a map of Pandora in my head, in my mind a savanna should be more inland.
ch 36 36. Private coms
Movies · The_Bip_Boop2003
I thought he was in the middle of a jungle/savanna nowhere near the sea?
ch 36 36. Private coms
Movies · The_Bip_Boop2003
Can you get us out of the forest and back to actual Harry Potter/England this has been the most painful drawn out arc ever. Considering dropping and looking at the comments I’m not alone.
ch 114 chapter 112
Good or Bad, Does it matter? (Harry Potter Fanfic)[TN]
Book&Literature · Lucifer09