Some of the technical aspects of the writing could be improved, and the FL has some flaws but no book's characters are ever flawless. In my opinion thats what gives this book character and makes it enjoyable. Early on, some of the trials the FL endures could have been easily overcame with simple communication, but that does get better with charcter development. Also the hot scenes are nice but the descriptions can be repetitive and cringy at times. All still very enjoyable!
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Some of the technical aspects of the writing could be improved, and the FL has some flaws but no book's characters are ever flawless. In my opinion thats what gives this book character and makes it enjoyable. Early on, some of the trials the FL endures could have been easily overcame with simple communication, but that does get better with charcter development. Also the hot scenes are nice but the descriptions can be repetitive and cringy at times. All still very enjoyable!
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