You are going to need some crazy plot armor for the dungeon to get more visitors. Smh
ch 23 Chapter 23: Goblin Rider
Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
Yeah yeah we get it, mc is cold hearted no need to repeat three times
A person screamed as a wolf tore into their stomach, indifferent to their pleas. The stomach was ripped open, revealing dangling intestines. The person convulsed on the ground, slowly succumbing to death.
Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
That's a dumb move, you get 100 coins regardless just for defending. Why would you kill someone the first day. Build trust, then build the idea that for little risk there is a lot to gain. But mc is short sighted af
ch 15 Chapter 15: Disaster Strike (part 2)
Eastern · BLACKangelmarl
Surprisingly you are a writer, I bets it's super dark and full of self hate. Any way thx for letting me know, Ive seen thing fixed from the discord and not from here from MU. Thx for info, I will keep that in mind. Feel free to not respond thank you.
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Eastern · Observing the Emptiness
Followers
I hope spelling it out helps. Appreciate the typo correction, but typos don't get fixed from here. Assuming you pointed out the typo so they could be fixed, you are losing time and effort. What you are looking for is in the discord for future reference. Also feel free to not hit me up again.
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Eastern · Observing the Emptiness
Bro chose violence for the mc, I feel it
A profoundly powerful Master-level aura radiated from her. One that was stronger than all Martial Masters of the Kandrian Empire.
Action · Lord_Streak
Fighting mc is like fighting a flash bang that doesn’t seem to stop exploding pol
"Fascinating," she murmured. "I was not aware that the future could be calculated. Yet your worths are undoubtedly truthful. I sensed a tsunami of conscious thought erupting within the depths of your powerful mind during your fight with Huldah."
Action · Lord_Streak
Following that logic, Sage Anckar became a sage because he loved violence so much it moved his soul, which is hilarious
"Every living creature is able to instinctively discern the future, whether it's something as simple as instinctively predicting the motion of moving objects or more complex instinctive estimations of the future of matters relating to people," she continued. "The origin of these instincts regarding the future is the subconscious mind. Sage Silas developed a sophisticated set of hypnotic training techniques that trained and honed that future instinct, elevating it far beyond instinct. Elevating it to the Eye of Prophecy."
Action · Lord_Streak
I didn’t mean that in a bad was, more as in I sexoected some crazy science bit
"It comes from the soul."
Action · Lord_Streak
Woah, mc can technically get a extra talented body like Nel. That’s way too op
Rui struggled to maintain his composure as the Beggar Sage casually revealed life-altering information to him.
Action · Lord_Streak
Wow, what if she is still an apprentice lol
As far as he was aware, the identity of such a person was entirely unknown. The identity of the first Martial Squire that triggered the dawn of the Age of Martial Art was known, but Martial Apprentices existed at least a century before the Age of Martial Art.
Action · Lord_Streak
Word travels fast, like really fast wow
"Prince Rui Quarrier Silas Kandria," the Flashing Flier calmly addressed him. "We are grateful for your willingness to mediate an audience with the Silas Clan. It is clear that you possess a much greater understanding of them than we do. Any and all information and aid that you are able to give will be greatly appreciated. You can rest assured that our objectives are to accommodate the Silas Clan in a position that is befitting of their power and contributions, just as we do with all Martial Artists in Kandria."
Action · Lord_Streak
Im not being sarcastic or acting like this is common sense bro, Im giving you know to save you time lol.
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Eastern · Observing the Emptiness
The supreme boi
The fact that Rui had singlehandedly granted the Martial Union this boon had elevated his position in the Martial Union to even greater heights. Not even 'platinum boy' was enough to describe how valuable and important he had become to the Martial Union.
Action · Lord_Streak
The basics of this story is the stronger the adventurer that dies within the dungeon generate exclusive dungeon currency that can be used to empower the dungeon or mc, but adventurers that kill monsters gain cultivation. A smart man would train the masses and harvest those that reached their full potential or are close to, but the mc just kills blindly. It requires a lot of plot armor to still have people go to the dungeon, plus a few chapters in the author loses sight of the story. Mc is now a dragon and he is never wrong (Plot armor)... A good idea executed incorrectly.
I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World
Eastern · BLACKangelmarl