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and just so u know i havent read it so dont mind the stars

what are the othwr names I can find it on other sites

In my opinion its very good and I would recomed you give it a try. So far (ch 152) and I am still eagerly waiting for new updates

Now hear me out. Like any other 'Lord novel' there are plot holes ans shalow characters and ofcourse out beloved people from DEAGON country aka(isnert the country we all think it is) . In the beggining the novel was even sexist and I was like wtf but I didnt have anything smarter to do so i keept reading. The sexist thing soon became less obvious so thats one less problem. There are certan typing errors but as english is not my first lenguage its not soo bad i cant keep reading. But if u came to to read a lighthearted lord novel I think its one of the best(Best among the worst not some achivment). Soo all in all u eather like it or hate it to the core.

The theme is good but are u for real a two year old going and killing, okey i understand its cultivation they develop faster no big deal , but oh boy the writing is terrible. Like a good third of sentances are butcherd and dont make any sense. I forced myself to get to premium chapters in hope author got sober but it just got worse. If this novel gets edited to look like some decent art u can coment soo i come back becose as I said the theme is interesting but before that i hope i can forget what I have read.

All in all the story is good. There aren't grammer mistakes or if there are the author corects them. The writing is pretty good and u can read the story in one sitting if u have that much time. You feel like you would like more chapters not like u NEED more chapters if you get what i mean. All in all give it a try becose u would probably like it.