Taylor9189

5h

Replied to Sky_Li_7376

not a problem, after doing editing for a few years, errors stand out like a sore thumb. most authors ignore correction suggestions so I've stopped for the most part.

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Alpha's Prize: Claiming The Wolfless Luna

Fantasy · Sky_Li_7376

Taylor9189

9h

Commented

"What a glorious day… WHAT A WONDERFUL DAY!!"

First Demonic Dragon

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

Taylor9189

1d

Commented

mark does have hair

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Alpha's Prize: Claiming The Wolfless Luna

Fantasy · Sky_Li_7376

Taylor9189

1d

Commented

never thought I'd have to say this but. .. thank you for not censoring yourself

ch 0 1 Not Ordinary Wolves

Wolfdale: Blood of The Moon

Fantasy · Tizzz

Taylor9189

1d

Commented

stop censoring yourself

Although I was a bit pissed off about him having sex with me and then ran off...but who the hell would put his dick in someone else's vag*na, enjoys his self, maybe even suck her breasts and then ran off.

The Alpha's True Luna

Fantasy · 4am_Prime

Taylor9189

1d

Commented

don't ever shorthand, it's lazy

I threw my head up, immediately wiping my tears. I wouldn't want to miss my own mating ceremony; no one would. "The ceremony... Omg, I am going to be late. I haven't even picked a dress yet. I looked down at the little oversized dress I had on me.

The Alpha's True Luna

Fantasy · 4am_Prime

Taylor9189

2d

Commented

Felicia: "I see him. Lord where did I go wrong, this boy not thinking with the head on his shoulders, but the one between his legs!"

Blessed by Night

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

Taylor9189

5d

Commented

are -----> large

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First Demonic Dragon

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

Taylor9189

6d

Commented

ch 582 There Will Be Blood

First Demonic Dragon

Fantasy · AnathaShesha

Taylor9189

12d

Commented

they are? I think you were aiming for "there is"

"Of course they are bad news," the Count sighs, disappointed. "Nothing good ever comes from that useless son…"

Reincarnated in the Astral World

Fantasy · LamenThief

Taylor9189

12d

Commented

for the guy being so nervous the errors actually work

All eyes at the table turn to the messenger, who walks clumsily and nervously towards the Count and kneels, trembling. "Your Grace… this servant… I'm sorry… there are bad news…"

Reincarnated in the Astral World

Fantasy · LamenThief

Taylor9189

12d

Commented

died ----> death

"No, he seems to be the strongest since his father's recent died," Circe answers, her eyes and smile taking on a sinister glint. "But forget those Golden Lions; you won't believe what I've discovered…"