Hey no need to go that detail in explanation. He just met the dude. Why say everything? If the author wants to say it to readers just monologue the whole thing since it's basically third person story.
"Well, nothing happened; you know I like Alicia, right?" He nodded. "So at that time Efline confessed to me, I had already started to like Alicia. And I already knew she liked me, but I couldn't accept her feelings because of the issues in the family, and as I was dumb at the time, I said some harsh things to her so she wouldn't be persistent. And as you know, when you start to hate someone you love, the hatred is far more immense than love. That's the trick I used on her to divert her attention from you."
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
Yah the status in messed up
?[Swordsman Lvl.1]
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
Loaded
Jadel Wayner." an extra from a second strongest human family, the Wayner family, also known as The Ruler's Of the Night.
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
"I have a man now so leave me" she said and walked away leaving me alone in that restaurant. Upon seeing the man, she smiled at him. I couldn't find any coldness in her face.
Fantasy · LightOfMoon
Gotta protect them from bad eyes
The Three Managers (1)
Sports · leeroycgna
Because the universe(:author) couldn't let the MC on bench you idiot.
Ken's face contorted. How had they received an injury in the very first innings, and in a friendly match of all things? It was then that his attention was snatched away by the sound of a notification.
Sports · leeroycgna
He has some real mood swings
"I really didn't want to see that…" Ken remarked, feeling as if his mood had dropped once again.
Sports · leeroycgna
so it's his last year in middle school
'If I remember correctly, I should be in class 3-C this year along with Daichi.' He thought to himself, moving past the large bulletin board and heading towards the gym.
Sports · leeroycgna
Of course, the dude was kneeling in the bathroom
Ken alighted from the car after briefly saying goodbye to his mother. During the entire car ride she had been asking if he really was okay to go to school today, probably because of how weirdly he had been acting this morning.
Sports · leeroycgna
Thank God it's not just yet. I was about lose hope for this fic when I thought he was about defeat a kage at 11.
So according to Kazuki's estimate 70% progress would be enough but according to his template progression speed it will take at least 4 years to reach that level.
Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
plz no harem
[Update: Most patrons prefer not to have a harem. And I'm glad about it.]
Movies · pujimaki
Why Harem though? He already has a wife and a kid. I mean this is a modern world right?
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: A New Beginning
Movies · Alak_Samba
Leave it dude. He said he only here for fun. There are better authors out there searching for feedbacks even in WebNovel writing fanfics while wanted to genuinely improve their quality and performance and maybe even become professionals. Don't waste your time arguing pointless matters.
If I want to, I can drop this fanfic right here and now and no one can stop me. Since like those haters who can only hide behind their anonymity in the internet, I am also the same so I can just log out from this account and turn a dear ear to your insults and complaints.
Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday
Yeh bro it seems so and unlike noob authors here he seemed to consciously took that decision
The accident happened in early January, right into the first day of the third term. It forced me to stay in the hospital for one and a half weeks, and then I had to spend an additional two weeks in rehabilitation at home.
Anime & Comics · WrightBrothers
Hmmm, makes sense
"Well, nothing happened; you know I like Alicia, right?" He nodded. "So at that time Efline confessed to me, I had already started to like Alicia. And I already knew she liked me, but I couldn't accept her feelings because of the issues in the family, and as I was dumb at the time, I said some harsh things to her so she wouldn't be persistent. And as you know, when you start to hate someone you love, the hatred is far more immense than love. That's the trick I used on her to divert her attention from you."
I Transmigrated Into a Messed Up Body
Fantasy · LightOfMoon