All the talking and conversations are so jam packed that it isn’t very coherent and just a pain to read and puts people off from the story, you gotta work on a different way of writing for talking because this just isn’t working man. It’s all so compacted that it makes the story feel as dry as reading a dictionary man
ch 0 1 Prologue
Anime & Comics · DaoistTvdDKH
Is he gonna have an actual wolf form?
ch 0 3 First member of the pack.
TV · aitch_Dao
They weren’t in the original but as of late everyone has been putting them in fanfics
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Anime & Comics · Juipt
The reason I said they sucked was due to the ghoul one being a thing in that world already done and then the venom one would just enhance the persons physical abilities and not chakra or anything with it so it would kinda just be a stronger might guy, the T. rex one was the only one I actually saw that could be interesting but you do what you think would be interesting
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Anime & Comics · Juipt
I mean they all kinda suck for that world but this one would be interesting if you made it into a bloodline when he slowly is like a werewolf but features turn into T. rex parts and then finally turns into a full one but he’s a earth dragon 🤔 (could even have a contract with a dragon clan summons because of the earth dragon bloodline in him barely passing acceptance to have it and when training for sage mode he slowly purifys the earth dragon blood and become a actual dragon)
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Anime & Comics · Juipt
And yet you have her using shadow clones
'and she won't be able to handle an A rank jutsu power...sigh
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
She doesn’t have enough chara to use that
"I'm good in...Shadow clone....and..and That's it" she said as Naruto and Sasuke looked towards Sakura in disdain
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
So it didn’t change after taking the new pill? Dumb
Bloodline-Uzumaki 100%
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
6+3 is 9 years old, they graduated at 12
Time skip 3 years graduation
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
The last chapter said naruto was 7, bro…
'im six and Sasuke is seven...Uchiha mascar is tomorrow I think...my love...Izumi is a great girl I will safe her from-wait...I need genjutsu!' as Naruto thought he said
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
Shouldn’t be able*
As they created Rasenshuriken and Infront was a thousand Naruto who were gonna fought a Taijutsu battle
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
Honestly idk how you think this is possible bro but he only has chunin chakra amount (makes zero sense btw due to him being a full blooded uzumaki and jinjuriki so should have at least elite jonin amounts) and he’s spamming shadow clones and the s rank rasenshurikin non stop here, so he should be able to use either on with the current chakra amount..
As they created Rasenshuriken and Infront was a thousand Naruto who were gonna fought a Taijutsu battle
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
Fuin increased learning, minds eye of kagura, and chakra sealing chains. You’re forgetting some
Title- the Jinchuriki Of Kyubbi-title effect--50 percent in chakra control -Pureblood uzumaki-fuinjutsu learning increases by 200%
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
What about the uzumaki innate skill to sense chakra, kids eye of kagura i think it’s called? He didn’t need that skill or class since he’s now a pure blood uzumaki and should have that innate skill bein strong af, along with the chakra chains of his clan..
[Host has unlocked sensor class ability 'chakra sense']
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
This was 6 before
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Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
He’s six, the clan thing happens when he’s 7🫤😂
"I will defeat you first and then kill my brother!!"Sasuke yelled and dashes towards me
Anime & Comics · gaming_saff
Honestly I’m just imagining this dude walking the streets of the uchiha clan during the massacre getting all the pick ups from the deaths
His predecessor had been an ordinary Jonin. After Kazuya picked up attributes for two years, his strength had exploded. Just by looking at his Chakra, he was about to break through the Jonin limit, approaching Elite Jonin! With the various ninjutsu talents he had picked up, he could use Chakra of all five elements: fire, lightning, wind, water, and earth. In terms of raw capability, he was stronger than Kakashi from the original plot. A Jonin wasn't just a common soldier; even in the Great Ninja Villages, they held significant power. Kazuya was undoubtedly among the best of the Jonin, his strength approaching Kage-level.
Anime & Comics · ZEN1ST6
Can we not do the constant back and forth between the past and present please, it would be much Better if you started from what happened in the past and show everything about that time and then come to his time in school, the time jumping as is, is just annoying af.
ch 0 7 Chapter- 7 : Hunger Part - 2
Book&Literature · KUROSAKI_Megumi
What about de powering them to ems and even sharingan like madara can?
[Oh don't worry, you can activate and deactivate them at will unlike the others.]
Reincarnated as Naruto in Konoha
Anime & Comics · LuciferTheDevil767