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5d

Commented

what is up with the names and changing how did the older brother change names and niw again the names change. it throws rhe readernoff

ch 56 Chapter 56 Everyone's Hearts are Stirred Up

Pampered Marriage Night Attack: Buy One Cute Wife, Get Two Free

General · Lemon Honey

DaoistplbSgY

1yr

Posted

there character discription needs some work. cannot envision the character because of this. have no mental image of the surroundings. the story is good and develops at acceptable pace

The Hunter’s Lucky Little Lady

General · Pledged Spirit Moon

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1yr

Posted

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