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Please read my comment properly before commenting again, if you had done so in the first place you would have seen that I took issue with the MC facing no challenges and having everything he wants handed to him on a silver platter by the author so if anything, my problem is that the pacing is too fast. As for giving the author 'time to write' I don't see how that would resolve any of my issues since they aren't necessarily with the direction of the story but rather with the author's writing ability which I don't see him improving anytime soon (especially if people refuse to point out the glaring flaws in his work). TLDR your indignation is unjustified and you clearly can't read well, probably why you're so quick to defend this dumpster fire.

I read up to chapter 39 but now I'm dropping it, most of the chapters are taken up by the MC thinking or the author expositing how the skills and powers sytsems work and it's gotten really boring. There's also the constant conveniences that the author keeps handing the MC like him being the first person to have the idea of deodorant, or some random guy he met once getting his God to set up a meeting with Hephaestus for the MC. At this point what little momentum the story had is dead and I don't see it getting any better.

If a halfwit like the MC can get this far this easily then Sidious would have already made himself emperor of the galaxy before the fic even starts.

I tried this story again because It has a unique premise and I believe that if it was written by a competent author then this could have been one of the best star wars fics ever but it is not. The story is not engaging at all because it has no stakes and the MC faces no challenges, this is exemplified in the Kuat Drive Yard chapter where the MC recruits the best starship designer they have with no effort, no discussion, no trade, no nothing, it just happens because the author wants it to. Next he says he can just buy a whole starship manufacturing corporation for 200 million (this is pennies compared to what he's been throwing around) the author just hands his SI everything on a platter because he's to useless to make these things happen organically. Don't get me started on Blissex and his daughter calling the MC's designs genius, they're not even designs, just drawings of the hulls of cannon starships (since if he can actually design starships then he doesn't need Blissex). In short, the author is too unintelligent to write a smart MC so he compensates by making every other character a slackjawed, drooling moron and artificially removing every obstacle in his path. Do not waste your time on this.

The writing quality makes this a chore to read, I think the author should just stick to spanish.........................................................

The writing quality is really bad, I spend most of my time re reading paragraphs in order to decipher what the author is trying to say, I think he'd be better off re writing this in his native language since the terrible grammar really drags this fic down.