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but you're not him, i'm just saying it's reasonable to put the background story on the account, cause nothing will make sense if he's betrayed in the past then he trusts very easily even now?
In the end, Theo is friends with Susanoo, and he doesn't believe they would harm him.
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
for a guy that's been betrayed, he trusts very easily. i don't know why or how but i think it's naivety because he knows the plot.
In the end, Theo is friends with Susanoo, and he doesn't believe they would harm him.
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
Theo: "Thanks for waiting for me. After all, it's normal for a king to move around with his army, isn't it?"
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
trying hard to be cool .....sucks and cringe at the same time
Then, a hundred shadows emerged from his shadow, and he began to walk slowly towards the guests.
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
more like speeding things up
Vali rushed towards me even faster, driven by newfound motivation. I decided to allow him to land at least one hit to boost his morale. As he threw a punch, I made it look as though he'd struck me. Albion noticed what I was doing, but chose to remain silent.
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar
seriously bruhh
Within the interrogation room. Erix was currently sitting with a handcuff in his hands having been brought by the justice league as precaution seeing he was a bigger threat than Darkseid himself!
Crimson Monarch: Endless Journey.
Anime & Comics · ChesterCure
You're welcome and your fanfic is interesting btw.
As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.
Overlord : God of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Azoroth
and please if you want to enrich your vocabulary and literature then place this on the literature section of webnovel to note the reader, thank you.
As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.
Overlord : God of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Azoroth
I meant no offensive words btw, but on how things that you write on those very specific lines like, ex: " i grab him in the hand, the smooth yet rough skin of his hand that endure countless hours of work, left me with awe and admiration to him" see to me if i'm not aware of his gender the people will mistaken him to be a girl. that's what i'm saying to much dramatic words on too little action will be boring to read and it's becoming annoying really it's not a Shakespeare book to be a dramatic, But town it down a little bit it's more interesting to be specific in battle scenes. And you didn't write it in your synopsis that you intend to sharpen your vocabulary....
As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.
Overlord : God of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Azoroth
and by any means don't add the word "not" if you already use the word "don't" cause it will be like this "do not not"..
Kahn: (raising an eyebrow) "Pirates, huh? Might as well give 'em a little fireworks show. Shell 'em."
One Piece : Earning One Trillion Berries Before Retiring
Anime & Comics · KLNovel
it seems like the mc is the wife of momonga the way of describing it... too many dramatic words for being lazy to describe the stats of the MC. just "NOD" is fine author.
As I extended my hand, a familiar sensation enveloped us, the magic of teleportation whisking us away from the throne room to the enigmatic realm of the 11th. In that fleeting moment, I cast a last glance towards Momonga, a silent promise that together, we would confront the mysteries that awaited us.
Overlord : God of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Azoroth
sounds gayy
"Exactly," I replied, offering a reassuring mental nod. "We'll face this head-on, step by step. Together."
Overlord : God of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Azoroth
where?
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Overlord : God of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Azoroth
?? where?
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Overlord : God of Darkness
Anime & Comics · Azoroth
you go first
"get your ass up and plant that fence down before I whip your dirty ass nigg-"
Demented psycho through the multiverse
Anime & Comics · Lustful_Death
they don't bow they use guns....jwk
The female police officer immediately bowed slightly quite politely before heading towards the police car parked by the roadside and leaving to continue her patrol.
My Yandere girls in Marvel
Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
the story feels like it's forced, every action, convo, too much speed.
Vali rushed towards me even faster, driven by newfound motivation. I decided to allow him to land at least one hit to boost his morale. As he threw a punch, I made it look as though he'd struck me. Albion noticed what I was doing, but chose to remain silent.
Reincarnation in DxD with wishes
Anime & Comics · emir_adar