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Anyone can confirm if it gets bad from here? Novel was going so well now this stupid conditions ruin it. Unless author develops it way it works not a beta mc getting ntred? If not ya save me my time by dropping it.
"First, you must not kill the main character or actively do anything that will harm the main character. Of course, that also includes stealing opportunities or anything that should belong to the main character."
The supporting character's harem is very normal
Fantasy · HikaruKiki
Agree with you. As much I critizise stories I appreciate yours. Sure started out so so though has improve though no story is perfect. Keep doing youre best. I critic cause i like it though in the end all that matters is your opinion. keep it up.
I'm an independent adult with a regular life. Writing takes me effort and I do it in my free time between work, sometimes even on the train. Sometimes I don't even want to write and I still do. If you have any inconvenience with paying then don't do it but don't come here like an ungrateful little bitch trying to boycott, go and read someone else's crappy cliche.
DxD: Multiversal Therapist
Anime & Comics · Photosphere
While it has improve, why did it take this long to start getting stronger? Lets be honest its stupid. Only reason I can think off is to follow closely to canon plot. Youre telling me all this time was wasted just basically doing nothing till now. No excuse you know theirs multiple ways one can train, grow stronger from so many stories not just dxd, plus didn't he said would do anything to get back with Elysir? 100% full idiotic.
The First Customer
DxD: Multiversal Therapist
Anime & Comics · Photosphere
I can deal with the rest. Cheater? Fine, dum? Fine? Simp retard? Nope. MC currently extremely pathetic. Just first impressions hope it improves bit but being a simp major nope.
ch 0 2 Prologue II: Blinded by the Lights
DxD: Multiversal Therapist
Anime & Comics · Photosphere
To follow "cought"cannon"cought" right lol.
"But I didn't hand over Akeno to you casually, I handed her over to you because it was, and the facts have been proven, I didn't read you wrong."
Endless Plunder in High School DxD
Anime & Comics · DarkShadow95
Let me guess, besides such a pathetic attitude as a mc, never ever though grab common sacred gears, author probably going try follow cannon somehow. This is a prime example of it. Seriously all this time and useless physical training but never though gettiing easier gears before this maybw help of his fathers family. Will it get better? Im hoping gets better but so far leaning dropping it.
"Miss Rias, I want you to take Akeno!"
Endless Plunder in High School DxD
Anime & Comics · DarkShadow95
Does it get better? Im seeing a common routine of outragous training, gravity increase blah blah . Though when it counts it means garbage just nerfed every time. like come on he should be way stronger than cannon but nope always same. will this be constant so i can drop it?
"Haaaaa!" Alex thrusted his fist out, and turned to kick an imaginary opponent. He was training with the super Saiyan form, and trying to increase his mastery over it. After he went through the motions with increased gravity, Alex then dispelled the form and extra gravity, leaving himself at his new usual 125 times normal gravity. He then summoned the gauntlet, and saw the timer indicated a week left. Alex sighed at the situation. If his guess was correct, then the countdown would end either during, or after the fight with Loki. He felt as if he developed the usual protagonist luck for things to happen at the worst possible moment. Deciding that he couldn't do anything about it, Alex then pulled out Ascalon, and went through the motions with the sword.
God succession system
Others · Harry_Dresden
Not great at all. Plus the way its produce is cruel. Look up how its produce, ya Ill pass on it.
The fragrance of foie gras was nothing short of enchanting. It bore a subtly wild undertone, a hint of the exotic mingled with the inviting aroma of rendered fat and a delicate, sugared note. The mingling of the savory and the sweet—like a buttery serenade—unfolded even before the first bite.
Genshin: The Serenity System
Video Games · Unusual_
Tell me about. At this point reading up current chapters hoping author makes right or at least improve MC peanut brain. Who Im I kidding probably going more training arcs for other instead Idk focus on actually getting stronger.
"You are right, Ryan. You need to make sure you hide this ability from others. This kind of ability will bring you bad things. Even when you thought that you already reached the level of God, you still cannot reveal this ability."
The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
Anime & Comics · Ryusenka
This confirms it, MC has the brain of a peanut. so mich inconsistecys but if course plot will make it right evenif it makes no sense.
"I want to talk about my origin of power and my origin."
The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
Anime & Comics · Ryusenka
Power scaling makes no sense at times. One moment up agains a big bad next moment struggling against fodder? Same with the tournament and what haplen with his sign in systems seems extremely useless lately. Will good boy keep training othets or be useless?
"Take Over: Beast Soul!"
The Laziest System: Sign-Up System
Anime & Comics · Ryusenka
Thanks story, but heres where Im out. So much added characters not from genshin getting stale. Added arc which honestly being bland so far and now reincarnators? If you enjoy it keep going, take care.
"Reincarnator indeed, just like you. I was reincarnated as Akagi from Azur lane as you became Izumi Miyamure from Horimiya, though you go by a different name than the character you look like" (Akagi)
Genshin Impact: Ultimate System
Games · Shonpufi