Repeated chapter
ch 62 Chapter 61
Anime & Comics · FFAddict
I don't understand, why don't you share a patreon link, why are you so sneaky?
ch 18 Chapter 18 - The Navigation Book! Eldoraggo Appears! [+18]
Anime & Comics · MrBlackWing
That's not how potions work
ch 55 Chapter 55: Jordan Williams and the Polyjuice Potion
Book&Literature · bobthewriter
Just realised a plot hole - the boy who lived (Neville) bought an own (hedwig), but didn't buy Harry's previous wand... So harry left his wand in the oliwander shop for no reason. I'm sure author will ignore this point, but still... Also - Hedwig was not special to begin with, there's no reason for harry not to buy a new owl.
ch 10 Chapter 10: Shopping trip
Book&Literature · Krio_Genix
I just don't understand, you said you are sorry, but you didn't remove the repeated chapters... You didn't fix anything at all - delete the repeating chapters not only here, but in other fics too!
ch 81 I'M SUPER SORRY!
Anime & Comics · FFAddict
Why not combine devil and angel energies to create niphilhelm~ (most likely wrote wrongly) energy in a potion that let's you adapt to the combined energy. His race will change to something else enterely with no weaknesses. Not sure about dragon energy tho, it might mutate him somehow, in that situation he might need to learn transformation magic dragons use to return to normal human appearance.
ch 26 Race Change poll
Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
Wow wow wow, chill....
ch 47 Chapter 47
Anime & Comics · FFAddict
Repeated chapter.....
ch 213 Chapter 213
Anime & Comics · FFAddict
Writing quality - good enough 5/5 Updating stability - good enough 5/5 Story development - nothing interesting like ever happened, so 2/5 Character design - inconsistent 3/5 World background - the story revolves around author's created characters 2/5
One Piece: Lost in the Tutorial
Anime & Comics · Wicked132