Oof thank you :)
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A Spark Between Us
Fantasy · Alaura90
I love the story so far. I’m about halfway through and I’m hooked. There is some repetition, especially in the beginning, but i think if the author did a quick proof read it would do wonders on this story. The characters are awesome. The group of friends reminds me somewhat of my childhood friends, drama and bickering but will still do anything for each other.
Thank you so much for the review 🙏
I am a new writer and this is the first story I’ve ever written! It took me so long because I am so shy 🙈 I’m so excited for this competition and for you to read my story. If you like it, please vote for me! 🥰
I think Klara is just misunderstood. Her character has really grown and matured and I hope she finds love
It’s not like you were helping them look for it Lucian 🙄🤦♀️
Lucian tried to keep his calm but his nails were already elongating and his body itched for blood. "Bring them to me.!"
Married to the Devil's Son
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
I was immediately interested the minute I started reading. I can’t wait to read more chapters and see where you take this. I hope you win. Good luck!
No the correct form of a male witch is still witch. Witches get their magic from the moon goddess, the earth, or sometimes demons(black magic) so it’s also a religion... wizardry is not a religion it uses a complex system of operation and magical and enchanted items such as wands and potions. Witches can use items like this but they don’t need to.
How stupid she was. Of course he could. He was a witch so he would probably just make them fall asleep like Irene did.
Married to the Devil's Son
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
I feel like the writer was a little sleepy when she/he wrote this chapter. It just started and there are already so many mistakes
The woman's face turned blue. "You shouldn't go there My Lady. There is blood everywhere."
Married to the Devil's Son
Fantasy · JasmineJosef
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original A Spark Between Us
“Even with all of his kind gestures, she knew deep down that he was dangerous and how could she ever trust someone like that?” Would you change everything you believed in for the sake of destiny? Clara’s average college life takes a chaotic turn when she and a handsome stranger acquire strange powers which make her question everything she thought she knew about herself. Will he corrupt her or will she warm a cold villain’s heart? *mild offensive language/violence and sexual situations (no derogatory terms, no rape)21 Chs 12 Collections
Guys, stop complaining about the asterisk. The author already said that the app did it
Married to the Devil's Son
Fantasy · JasmineJosef