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This story is really good not sure how bad the original is or how much effort is going into this translation but so far no complaints.

*her sorry on mobile

Yeah Hanabi is interesting never really thought about jer but now that I have I kinda like it. I'd suggest it be a slow burn type of relationship The mc has a deadline and is treated poorly even if he has an older mentality he has the emotional capacity of a child. So he shouldn't jump into a relationship or friendship right away. As for abilities perhaps he can Devolop one of the 6th powers life return and use it to develop his own form of Nen. That way he doesn't have to buy it but still works for it.

Kinda late but I just remembered that he took over a branch of Yakuza and I know that he can create abilities but an ability like Overhaul would help mitigate some problems. He could use it to make himself more durable, heal others and take others abilities it would also allow him to alter and change the battlefield without having to make a domain

Hey love this story only thing is that Maha is not Zigg but it's believed Zigg is Maha's son or maybe sibling Maha is Great Great Grandpa while Zeno is Grandpa we don't know Zeno's parents

This is just my rambling so feel free to ignore me especially since his Haki is only to organ level and not cells but it made me think if haki iis Willpower he could totally make his own version of Jenova ccells by infusing haki into them and control people that share his cells DNA

I've been checking daily for this, I'm way to hyped for this duel there's something special about Kaiba getting owned weather it's a female version or not.

Hey I'm not sure if it'd be taboo or something but it would be interesting to make a sentient cursed weapon or something like the Demon weapons from soul eater and it can have the cursed ability of resonance allowing one to fight beyond their means as long as they can match cursed energy wavelengths

I think Personally he'd be a dual class Luke how semiramis is caster/ assasian he'd be Beast/Ruler

Ik the chapters are written in advance and Orion doesn't care about how the rings are used but a good way of regulating them is to only produce a set amount and distribute them to certain people or schools. Then Orion could allow people to rent them not buy them so that way he keeps making money off of them and they can keep track of who has the rings

I can only say she got you a ring...she's a keeper that's hella based

I mean depends patreon is good because it allows usually early access and even if you don't get consistent donations a bunch of people donating for a single month is better than none but if you do I'd set up resonable prices.

Ah ok it was real confusing I was like who's Jaba I was picturing the guy from star wars. But his name is Scopper Gaban

I typically don't read stories until they have more chapters so I can read them in one go but this concept kinda interested me. I've been getting into Honkai/Hoyoverse through fanfics, and Danmachi is pretty good base for xover fanfic material. I'm interested to see where this story goes.

It seems like he forgot that it said in his legend his wife and Daughter Die. He is literally playing into the hands of fate while claiming he's trying to avert it.

This story is pretty good tbh I'm kinda expecting him to go the Zeref route and eventually make his own demons and then become a world class threat spoken about in whispers

Ok ngl that life point line went hard af felt like it was lifted from the anime actually got me slightly hyped. Nice job bro, also that ring sounds really nice I have a hard time picturing it because my imagination sucks but it sounds like you put a lot of thought into it.

Came back to check for an update and cringed because it said woth instead of with...really love mobile sometimes