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It seems like I am wrong looking at the content I see that he already finished 3rd year and started the 4th.

I don't mind op MC but the pace is slow. Extremely slow. Even a snail can out pace this story. MC is not likable. So far chapter 74 and all thing that is worthwhile is that he establish a friendship with the twins. Did I mention slow, chapter 74 and MC plus batchmates are in 1st year, that's not all not even a month has passed of school year. At this rate we would have 10k plus chapter before triwizard tournament. Forget 5 th 6 th and 7 th year. Mark my word it shall never be finished. Webnovel should have negative star or blackhole. It would get 5 supermassive blackholes.

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Nice plot. (Webnovel site standard very good) Writing quality armature (but in this god forsaken site writing is good) Stability of update heartbroken (as far as I can see it's dropped) Character design average (good in this site) World background bad. ( even for this site) But I must say it had excellent promise. Shame it was dropped. I would like read more of this. But alas. P.S: To author if you finished with your writing carrier to bad if you stick around and get gud you would succeed. And try to finish what you started.

Why the high rating? Because it's one of the best fanfic in this cesspool of fanfics. But it is compare to 9th circle of hell's hellfire to searing frying pan full of ultra hot oil. Frying pan and the oil is this novel. Where are lightsaber battles and duels? Bringing in another sci-fi world then nerf everything to oblivion, why? Then comes physical issue of protag height and other things. Also the wives and offspring. Character development is not good. Mother of bad ending. Why the author did this ending is beyond me. The ending leave you with a very bad teste. P.S: Not behind paywall so plus. P.S. 2: The proper rating should be 3 to 3.5 stars.

So so soooo ... ... mature what he did to his 2 elder brothers. Super mature about romance. 2nd gf is ultra mature. Next gf will have body of 50 years old, let the cougar hunt begin (after about another 1000 chapter.) Super mature now all human friend are girls not bois allowed. Where the fck are the original goals now? Random arc and side story for the win. Headless writing.

Very fine piece of work. Please do read as I did. Odi arc was the masterpiece. MC is every men women and teens dream and role model. The character interaction is better than the "War and peace". Real rating Writing Quality: 1.5-2.5 Stability of Updates: 4 Story Development: prolog 3.4 main story starts 3 then goes downhill 1 Character Design: 0.05 World Background : 2

Not to mention too much slice of life type of romance. Also sappy as hell. Megaship all around friendship, relationship... o my the cringe "she deserve someone better" "feels betrayed" "opening up" "ex-gf but super duper best friend" "trust". MC is a sad mix of super chad and ultra simp in every wrong way possible. Odi arc is 100+ chapter can easily be omitted. When reading you can't shake the feeling that 2 people is writing this one male one female. Or 2 woman pretending to be male.