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You took the book/movie, added Luci and made Hermione even more annoying than before in the most unnatural of ways...and she is what? 11 in the 1st year. Absolutely Trippin.

................. A Mutate is different from a Mutant. A Mutate doesnt have the X-gene, while Mutants do. Aunt May is His Aunt not mother... Sure magic is fine but lawd have mercy learn about the characters you are writing about.......

[img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry] So I kept reading it...its good. MC: Is strong but not too strong. I like the balances you are creating for his character. he is also developing at a decent pace and he is a flawed character which makes him a great character. Hades is Hades but a good dad. Zeus is Zeus. A spoiled brat lol Other gods are cool too. I am just waiting for poseidon to be like...guys I also broke the pact but after ya'll so dnt be mad at me. The Fates are strange, but its understandable that they can find a soul strand to obsess over. Still fuck Scythes but its versatiliy with its changes are cool. In a nutshell I look forward to reading more and I admit that I was wrong to judge it solely because of a Scythe.

I read up to certain point but when I saw a scythe I was like nope but you know what lemme try reading it again... and I will give you a better review okay. An in depth one.

You get a two for one reason and one reason only. Scythe.

Flip the rating...its 0.1...I just cant give this man a 0. Also you are a walking red flad...Rape System? Sigh

honestly I just want to give you a rating of -5/5all you do is post stupid annoying ass Patreon Add. Please have a chapter with a link to Patreon at the end or have it in yout description.This is just the most annoying pce of dogshit at this point. And I mean every single iteration of you as an author.

Honestly as soon as Laylah revealed herself I lost all interest in this story

I feel like this could be ge a good read but everytime I pick it up, I get confused. There is too much happening in regards to the MC that I honestly feel like tossing my phone away. From Sabrina having 1/2 his soul, the soul possession skill which has the original Alan's soul which can apparently take him over, the Abyss creature, the dragons, then his soul splitting even further, all of it doesn't make sense. I have never picked up a story and put it down as often as this one just trying to see if there is an end goal...but all I see is just conflict after conflict after conflict with no sort of solution or resolution in sight. I made it to Ch. 125 and I am frustrates to say the least. I hope it gets better and is no longer confusing.