Badges 11
Moments 63
My ability to suspend disbelief is getting a serious workout here, The fact that he did almost nothing to hide his relationship after what already happened to him seems farfetched also this isn't how you treat people you are interested in for a long term contract or service. This is how you treat disposable pawns who even if they flip can do you no damage.
ch 41 Blackmailed
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
I don't know how they have gotten to their level with so little critical thinking skills.
The vote was unanimous as each and every Trade Prince within the Ghimderi Trade Union agreed to start a war with the Germanic Star-Empire via the use of a proxy, and to kidnap the Alfheim Crown Princess so that they could gift her to the Svartalfheim Federation as a pleasure slave.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
This makes no sense? Why burn out your pilots for no reason?
The battle continued to wage on for another two weeks, with Erich going back to his routine of getting very little sleep while maintaining a schedule of twenty-two full hours of combat. However, in the end, after the last vestiges of the Dvrakian resistance faded away under the intense onslaught of the Germanic Armed Forces, the President of the Dvrakian Consortium capitulated....
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
This sounds more like a video game side quest then actual criminal behavior.
"Don't move a muscle, and don't you dare look at me! As we speak, your cargo bay is being filled with the product. Don't ask what it is, as it is not your job to know. All you need to do is to transport the cargo to Vaxkorvia, where your contact will be waiting for you at the following coordinates. Your contact will take the cargo from your ship, and will transfer the balance to our account, where we will pay you the agreed amount.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
This is a god awful amount of time and effort to spend just to score some booze and smokes.
The journey to the asteroid outpost took almost as long as the journey to the contraband facility that he had flown to during his previous underworld mission. After nearly two weeks of flying in space while alone in his ship, Erich finally arrived at the star system which housed his destination.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
It's statements like this that have me doubting you did any research into an actual war in preparations for writing this war story. I can't understand how any modern navy would make such a foolish decision? If your increasing your navy by 50% in such a short time then you would never throw away veteran troops like this, you would instead rotate your fleets on the front line and to move your veteran's around to stiffen up the newer fleets while giving every fleet a chance to bleed there new recruits. This throwing away of your best for no reason is just stupid.
Of course, the more losses the First Armada suffered, the fewer men they had to support their campaign, and thus they would suffer even more casualties at a higher rate. But this was a risk the Admiralty was willing to take.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
huh? The number one reason authors give for quitting an ongoing novel is the hateful comments they get online that kill any enjoyment they get out of writing a story. Considering you already finished your last novel which I loved, and is the only reason I am here, good on you!
However, he was quick to assure the woman that he was fine, after all, he was used to being harassed by the public, and all they could really do was say mean words to him over the grid, which had no effect whatsoever on his mental state. In all honesty, Erich could not fathom what kind of sensitive sissy would get so offended by such nonsense.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
is this the knock off kobayashi maru?
It was not just starfighter pilots who partook in this scenario, in fact, every specialization which one could go into within the Navy had to go through the apocalyptic scenario, where they would fulfil their role to the best of their ability, and despite this nobody in the last four hundred years had ever been able to achieve a victory on the realism mode.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
man every time I see a famous or well known movie/book quote being used inside a different amateur novel, it always makes me cringe a bit and really brings me out of the story. If your not familiar with it, the above is similar to a lord of the rings quote from King Théoden as he asks, "What can man do against such reckless hate?" in The Two Towers movie. Not sure if it's in the books but it was close enough for me to think of it when reading it.
What kind of horrific monsters were these? And what civilization could possibly contend with such reckless evil? These were just a few of the thoughts that flooded Erich's mind as he heard the AI speak to him once more.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister
After being stabbed to death by a crazy ex, firsts things first, lets jump the first broad I see.
After saying this, Alex shoved his massive cock inside the beautiful red-haired woman's tight and moist hole. Something which caused her to moan like a whore, despite the fact that her hymen had just been torn.
Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
Urban · Zentmeister
How did he come to this conclusion? What part of a ghost has to do with cultivation?
However, the female ghost who had killed him ten times proved that this world was not a low level martial world, but a cultivation world.
What If I Can't Die?
Eastern · Infinite Sand
I'm 1000% sure he died from an STD!
However, in the middle of the night, Song Shi died.
What If I Can't Die?
Eastern · Infinite Sand
Handsome is just a pseudonym for feminine looking in all Chinese cultivation novels, the better looking the MC is the more like a girl they look. For some bizarre reason Chinese authors think, since women are attractive then the ultimate attractiveness for a man is to look like a women.
A handsome young man who appeared to be 15 or 16 years old was lying on a couch in a dusky room, illuminated by a single oil lamp.
Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws
Eastern · Carefree Smile
all your base are belong to us!
Becoming an Alchemist would also allow his clan to grew stronger since he would be able to concoct everything that had existed or was going to exist , he had absolute knowledge of alchemy.
Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens
Others · YeChenZhi
the grammar is so bad
In the Dou Qi Continent , Alchemist was the most respected professions and was way above the fighter of the same rank , a rank 9 alchemist like Yao Lao could cover the sky with one of his word , the problem he faced was the fact that the Hun clan of the 8 ancient clan was the one after him if not he wouldn't have died once.
Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens
Others · YeChenZhi
what's speaken?
The news about Hao Shen was without a doubt the most speaken of , people speak of the two genius of the Jia Ma Empire , they Hao Shen and Xiao Yan who were born the same year and already reached the 9-star Dou Zhi Qi realm , this made a lot of people incredibly excited because the two of them could cause the Jia Ma Empire to rise above the other faction surrounding it.
Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens
Others · YeChenZhi
the grammar in this novel is atrocious, how can you fill a clan with prodigy?
At the same moment the News about Hao Shen and Hao JinJing cultivations was also spread and become another hot topics , the Hao Clan became know as a clan filled with prodigy.
Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens
Others · YeChenZhi
who is hime?
before taking it out he went to were the ring was situated and took it , as he expected it was a storage ring , and after he bound it to himself , he was able to observe the gigantic size inside , it could be of use to hime as he would be able to stock a massive amount of things inside it , the storage ring was empty.
Rebirth: Battle Through The Heavens
Others · YeChenZhi
It doesn't get better, that's for sure. I'm on chapter 58 and I'm really struggling to give a shit as to what happens to him at this point. I mean you can only have your MC make so many poor choices before the audiences just gives up caring. The rest of the characters of the story have thread bare motivations and come off as 2d caricatures of competent people, as well as the politics of the galaxy so far is about as shallow and complicated as a school yard rivalry, To go from tyranny of steel to this disaster is mind boggling.
Interstellar Age
Sci-fi · Zentmeister