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Commented saber are used for slashing
The golden goblin's sword was a western style saber that was used primarily for stabbing. It struck at Wang Yu's crotch continuously with lighting-like speed.
MMORPG: Martial Gamer
Games · Immortal Iron Bull
It was well written it had a good flow and didn't feel forced. As you write more of these scenes they will come easier. The only thing i could say to improve is feel free to add more detail to make it feel like time is passing more smoothly. I agree with the previous comment i have read worse a lot worse.
ch 23 The red night!
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor