In two or three days, sorry, RL got in the way.
Honestly, that's the problem with fanfic, the reason I even went for the mad scientist route was because, at the time I started, fanfics were absolutely filled with Superman/Omniman copies where the MC could outpunch everyone. The focus at the time was on strength of body, not genius intellect. Or stories where the MC starts gaining power everywhere, from all sources. Now, Kara kinda has various different sources of power, but her core ability will always be in engineering. I too have come to realize a lot of the latest fanfics are about generic Iron man geniuses, which kinda annoys me, but won't change the direction of my fic.
Also, it doesn't close on the middle, but in a diagonal line along the crest of the El house.
The fifth one was completely different. It didn't have a cape but a dark blue coat with gold detailing, the El house symbol covered her chest. It also had red boots that ended just below her knees and matching gloves.
Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav
That's actually fairly accurate to what I picture... only Kara looks more feminine wearing it, and there are clear signs of technology, not just cloth or leather.
The fifth one was completely different. It didn't have a cape but a dark blue coat with gold detailing, the El house symbol covered her chest. It also had red boots that ended just below her knees and matching gloves.
Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav
Yeah, she has one like that too, it's just not as effective as a single plate of armor forged especifically for defense.
Ugh, she'd have to reforge the entire thing later, at least it would be faster than the first time.
Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav
Cheshire is artemis sister, Ravager is Deathstroke's daughter
"I mean, don't be mistaken, we are angry they got hurt," Flash said, scratching at his exposed face with a finger. "But we're also really proud. Their coordination was something else and they achieved every objective despite the surprises. I didn't even know Deathstroke had a psychotic daughter."
Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav
Well, honestly, Kara is a kryptonian, Superman is the strange one. Kara was raised by a scientific family to be a scientist and engineer, that's what she likes to do, what she was born to do and what she's good at, Kryptonian yellow sun powers are actually the strange thing. Sorry to hear you don't like it, but I do enjoy writing her that way, and I started the story because I wanted a Mad scientist kind of Kriptonian so...
Yeah... but the legal document says 18, it's even approved by the government!
"What? We're in Greece and I'm already 18 anyway, it says right there in my documents." Kara answered back smugly and traded amused smiles with the Amazon.
Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav
Well, she used it several times, and I did a few scenes of her practicing replicating the lights, even managing a brief burst of Orange light, but I never showed her manifesting the red light in training. I didn`t think readers wanted several scenes of her practicing until she managed to replicate the red light, and I thought it was stablished she was practicing. It wouldn`t come out of nowhere if I mentioned her replicating the red light here
"Alright, how do we do this?" Kara said. She had been eager to learn how to manipulate the Light Spectrum, even if her attempts hadn't been very successful. "I haven't been able to use the Green Light of Will at all. I did replicate the Red Light of Rage, briefly, and managed a few slivers of Orange or Violet too."
Anime & Comics · CaptaoCav
Yeah... the story starts great, it's a fanfic where the MC is a Mary Sue, so of course she's gonna be gifted at pretty much everything, from archery to martial arts, to business management and engineering, but at least they have a reason for it, it's not the greatest reason, but it can work. Also, she does take 6 months of training at the beginning and only becomes a match for catwoman, Batman can still beat her, which is more time than many such fanfics can say about their MC's. So, all in all, about 40 or 50 enjoyable chapters, not the greatest thing in the world, but good. Then we get to the Gotham arc and things change. EVERY, SINGLE. CHARACTER, seems to be fighting to hold the idiot ball. The author wanted the MC to solve problems so, every time there's a problem, no mater what, the MC is the one that will solve it, no matter where she, how long it takes, or how stupid the other characters have to be for her to solve. THe story tries to use humor to mask everyone's incompetency around the MC, but it doesn't land very well with me. People being stupid once or twice so the MC can look good I can stand, doing it every single chapter for more than 50 chapters is a little too much. In short, the MC is the greatest, she's a prodigy in anithing she tries and, to make her look good, whenever people are around her, their skills and IQ go down by 50% or more... it's almost like she has a debuff aura or something.
DC: The Queen Anomaly
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