Thanks for the chapter. Amazing work as always.
ch 364 Date
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
My dude, the author spent entire chapters about this pure trust and how this species experiences feelings differently than humans and how amazing that you can have this unique interaction with them and you just think of making a harem out of this. Unbelievable.
ch 356 Trust
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
Did he just stop writing this novel? Is it abandoned?
ch 324 Affection
Fantasy · Eveofchaos
fitting title I would say
ch 1258 1258. Slow approach
Eastern · Eveofchaos
I get what you mean in your review, and I'm not against these tropes they have become this common for a reason, after all. They are easy to work with and relatable or easy to understand so the audience doesn't feel lost. What I'm saying is that this is not a good implementation of these tropes. Characters feel like they belong to those those older, low quality wuxia novels. There is nothing wrong with simple characters, but making them boring/ too one dimensional or too on the nose is a problem. Writing should be more subtle and nuanced, and rather than characters/ side characters declaring their traits and desires, we should see how they act, react, and make decisions to deduce them. I think you will write some good stuff in the future, but this novel feels like you started low and are learning as you go rather than having a solid base writing level.
An Extra’s POV
Fantasy · Magecrafter