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In a distant realm, meet Alfonse, a 19-year-old student of Pilgrim. His life is far from ordinary. Yearning for more, he breaks free from mediocrity!
With newfound determination, Alfonse quests to discover his true purpose. He embarks on a grand adventure to exotic worlds, befriending allies and battling an enigmatic force.
Witness Alfonse's awe-inspiring journey as he transforms into an unparalleled powerhouse. Experience his remarkable metamorphosis and the power within. Can he save the world?
Join Alfonse on an exhilarating ride through fantastical realms. Uncover mysteries and marvel at his transformation. Get ready for limitless adventure and the fate of humanity. The legend begins now!
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This tale is well written, though a bit heavy on "Tell" vs show. still a good showing from this author, and I will be curious to see how this plot develops.
I really liked it there was just a few things that you could work on a bit more. I really focused on your first two chapters and helping you with those so you can see what mistakes and hopefully apply it to the future. But I loved it and you don't need to review mine but you can if you want!
'In a world of beats and hybrids, Alfonse is the only human...' I know that this interesting setup is what drew me to the book. It makes you wonder how and why Alfonse ended up in this world. The first chapter has a hook that pulls you but I think what I enjoyed most was how the author does a good job of showing the monotony of Alfonse's life. You can really tell that in the first few chapters that Alfonse is living a life he finds boring and disinteresting. It makes all the more sense for when in later chapters, Alfonse may want to do something to fight to change. Additionally, the author tries to make sure readers have a basic image of the world in the story. With that being said, I noticed there were a few grammar errors here and there in terms of the tense switches and typos. While speaking in present tense isn't bad, I would say the present tense shift doesn't feel like it works to the best of its abilities here in this book. Also, the book could use more details on the world and setting as well properly introduce the characters. The chapters move far too fast for me to remain invested in one scene or the other. This can be solved by simply detailing things such the settings and more. For example, it was written that the townspeople are animal hybrids, but no further descriptions were provided besides 'cat' 'dog' which left me with the image of just a regular dog and cat. You may to explain them looking like had the head of tiger but the body of a man or something like that. Besides that, I think your novel has a lot of potential with a little polishing. Good luck, author!
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I'm really enjoying this story as I'm reading I have to say. You have action, fantasy and adventure. I'm loving the journey of the protagonist and I am strapped in for the ride.
Pretty solid story, the author brings you to an interesting plot from the start, however i do see some flaws, but looking at the newer chapters, it seems as the author overcoated most of them. Keep up the good work.
Great Story! It is so interesting and has a great potential. I like how this story is going so far. Hoping for more soon! Can't wait for more chapters!
Not gonna lie, love the synopsis. Always up for adventures. Haha. Fighting, author.........................................................................
Great story, Author. It's really very impressive. Keep on going Author. Fighting. .......................................................................
.................................................. The story has great potential . also kudos to you for making it interesting . but TBH there's more than meets the eye in this novel . so continue writing good luck.
The world is built expertly and you can tell that the idea is very good. The storyline is written at a great pace. The plot is engaging and I cant wait to see what happens next. More updates, please.
Only 10 chapters for now but all I got to say is that the story seems like it has a lot of potential to turn into something big. Keep up the good work.
I really like the MC's adventurous side. His personality is very relatable to many people like me 👀👀 I'm excited to read further developments in his adventures the people he will meet, the many different places he will visit. Looking forward to the writing !!
I'm excited to read further into the story! The story promises of an adventure and i can't wait to sink my teeth into it! The protagonist is relatable, and I love him so! good job author! I'm cheering you on! aja! ♥♥♥♥♥