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This is a Naruto/Naruto Shippuden/Boruto fanfic. It is possible that the MC might venture into other worlds but that depends on how everything goes. By the way, this novel will feature a system but before you start rioting, this system will not feature any bloodlines or summonings or anything like that. It's gonna be from one particular series, and the series in itself is going to be weaker than naruto so don't expect an OP mc from the start. There's gonna be a lot of training too.
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Man idk what to say about this. It's a genuinely good fan fic. It's not some self insert virgin author who constantly makes the mc have sex with anything resembling a female, but an actual spin on a good series. He makes some unique choices too like a clan that is extremely underused and cool martial arts from gosu. The mc feels like an actual character in this not just some faceless mannequin for the author to live out his degenerate fantasies. Overall, very nice. It's good that he grows and hopefully faces challenges in the future and isn't just op from the start cause that would be super boring.
Gentle fist + water stream rock smashing fist sounds like it could be the most powerful taijutsu style and I cant wait for him to be on the level we're he can just beat a kage with it!
This novel only release 5 chaps as im writing this So cant say if its going to be good but based on the 5 chaps its good Reincarnated in naruto with a martial arts system with no level ups he can only buy martial arts from the system Giving 5 stars cause its going to have Gosu web comic martial arts
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2.4. It's not the worst i have seen, but it's quite far from a good fanfic i would say. Quite a few real bad point : " It's gonna be from one particular series, and the series in itself is going to be weaker than naruto so don't expect an OP mc from the start." --> Chapter 10 or eleven 8yo beat Jonin Anko and able to save her from orochimaru mark. I stopped at chapter 11, i felt like he acted like a cringe emo teenager with the hokage. The way he ignore him feel like he is a too much pridefull prick. I read the debate about that with another reader and still not satisfied. Actually i'm even more disatisfied since i know the way author see the world of naruto and it's from my point of view so twisted. The world is a bit different from the manga, with Senju still alive and kicking, but then somehow it doesn't feel like it had any consequences in the world odly enough. I mean obviously this is a critical thing which may lead to a completly different world, with for exemple the uchiha not being dead, since with the senju also being the only one who can challenge them alive, then there may be no need to slaughter the clan. Or at least it may happen at a much later time since it would make it harder for Danzo to convince the hokage that they are a danger to but uprooted. So yes, it's okay but really not that great, far from good as a conclusion. I won't even talk about the hyuga thing which is a mess from my point of view.
Its ok for now but why must there be a spacing/gap when u start a new paragraph. And one thing I hate about fanfics is when people use dialouge in this way Naruto : I am Naruto. Kakashi : I am Kakashi
Let's start. Writing quality is quite nice, there're some typos here and there but overall - good. The author updates frequently, but with this kind of a pace, you might burn out. Yeah, pace. The pace of the story is rushed. 5 years in one time-skip, 3 years in one time-skip, months in several time-skips and that is why. That is why the character design suffers a lot. Mc of this story is annoying, most of the time. He is ungrateful and mischievous (I will come back to this one). I admit, that you didn't ruin him as an assassin with the whole rebirth thing, but ASIDE the Mc, other characters feel bland. They're ok, truly average, but it could be better, if only you paid them some attention. With that said, we're coming onto the next one - World background - it's awful. The world revolves around the Mc, like in some rpgs. Without the Mc, nothing is going on. You've made a 5 year time-skip about an orphanage and said that he only slept there. So, you're telling me, that he didn't communicate, no one asked him anything and etc? Also, what I think is the worst thing about this novel - 'stupidity'. For example, when he takes Anko's cursed mark. The Mc is mischievous so he tries to play it as like he's ignorant and innocent, it's ok, but what is not ok is Hiruzen. Yes, Hiruzen, the third hokage. The one, that led Uzumaki to death. The one, who defended his village against the Kyลซbi. The one, who got over the deaths of his most cared ones. The one, who was one of the strongest shinobi in the world, DIDN'T SEE THROUGH THE PLAY. Oh, well, maybe Tenko is just a great actor, ok. What about Hiashi? Yes, that Hiashi Hyลซga. The one, that oppressed the whole clan. The one, who was as militarism-minded as Danzo and you're telling me that HE DIDN'T EVEN TRY TO CAPTURE THE BRAT? ESPECIALLY, WHEN HE'S FROM THE ROUGE HYลชGA WHORE? That's so fucked up. Oh and what I forgot to mention: the 3 year time-skip, the time-skip of the academy. You made it look like he only learnt some techniques and that's it. No communication? No bond building? No? Nothing? Watching the Mc grow is entertaining, for sure, but what next?
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Okay this is a good story to turn your brain off with but if your reading it to get a good story this isnโt the book for you. The grammar is bad but so is 90% of the other stories on this site so Iโll give it an okay. But the character are so stupid. The ninjas just donโt care about the actions he does. I mean come on he took orchimarus heaven seal AND NOBODY CARES. Let me put that into perspective, orchimaru is the WORST missing nin in recent times. For gods sake the third hokage said he was his greatest mistake, but because of main character logic he can take something that is KNOWN to be from orchimaru and nobody cares? Ninja should be paranoid because of what they do, which is assasinate people. Which is why it doesnโt make sense that they wouldnt send him straight to t&i. Another thing the hyuga clan head went out alone with no protection from ANYONE when he saw two jounin from the hygua clan be SHIPPED TO HIS HOUSE with a message saying โYour Nextโ I get that heโs arrogant but arrogance is NOT stupidity. I mean look at madra heโs arrogant but heโs not gonna be stupid enough to fight an opponent who he knows might be able to kill him (ran away from 6th paths naruto) So the hygua clan leader going out to train ALONE is stupid. All in all you can read it with your brain turned off but if your looking for something good itโs not for you.
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I really hope you will continue writing and don't drop this novel, please. Most another novel will ruin their story by making the MC perverted, irrational, chasing skirts left and right and submissive bitchy Mc. Your MC is one of my favorites he is selfish, only cares for himself, works hard, and works smart, and is not some horny dog. Most of all your MC doesn't suddenly become kind when he is supposed to be cold-blooded. ๐
Mixed feelings about this novel. Plus Points : 1) MC is truly ruthless, and doesn't care about anyone's feelings or goals. 2) Isn't afraid of messing up the story. 3) His journey to becoming strong is shown appropriately, with proper mix of power ups and fights. 4) Some good OCs. Nice to Senju clan a bit expanded more upon. Negative Points : 1) MC is too arrogant, disrespectful and anti-establishment even when very weak. That was dumb. 2) MC reveals too many powers initially, so should have ended in a laboratory 3) Sadly the OC from Senju were killed too quickly. 3) MC was never ever in any real life threatening danger. Almost nothing unexpected happens with him, so the thrill aspect is low. Overall quite decent. Has a few negative points, but positives balance it out.
This is how you writing a reincarnation fanfiction The MC was an assassin who didn't die due to some bull**** mistake he made . He is in character even after reincarnation there are no fuccking panic attacks and unnecessary character development he just keeps his goal of getting stronger I don't know why in some fanfictions people after reincarnation keep fooling around instead of becoming strongest and living as they please And some even try to go back to their ****ty home world But seriously this fanfic is a must read
This is probably the best fanfic I have read that hasn't been completed, I can see he is developing feelings for Kaguya but I hope he doesn't end up like any other cliche MC. Such as falling in love her and he tries tells her the secrets about the system and also making her stronger it just becomes to mucha of a burden like that Anyways love it.
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I just have to say that this to be top 3 probably out of any naruto system type of fanfiction I have read. The process of him gaining power is done well and I like how he is gradually building up the byakugan rather than the million of sharingans out there. I'm excited to see where he goes now that he's outside of the village.
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Going great, Soh, keep up the good work, give more chapters and don't be like a certain Husky, I know this can become one of the best naruto SI fan fiction
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bruuuhhh amazing my guy, absolutely love everything from character development to the skills he's obtaining and can't wait to read more keep up the amazing work xD
Godam you author i advise you new readers to read slowly otherwise you'll catch up in an instant and suffer as i do waiting for an eternity for a single chapter and don't go in thinking about your favourite characters he truly is merciless to all even to Pervy Sage himself
Great story over all, MC doesnโt mind killing and just being straight up cut-throat when he has too. .......... .................... .............................. Keep Up The Good Work! ๐๐พ
Not bad. However, mc to me seems to be a bit too edgy and dark but not in a good way. Evil doesn't mean mc has to be all moody and 'boring'/maybe??! I hope mc eventually becomes better in personally while still being evil. Also, the mc being Hyuga and being sent to the orphanage is quite stupid as the clan would NEVER allow one their bloodline being out of their reach. Why do you think they have the whole eye x seal on foreheads thing? Its to PROTECT their unique bloodline and him being left alone seems quite realism breaking.