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why?

I'm going to assume you mean cuz random violence is funny

this is high School DxD it's basically a given for it to be a harem

I mean you're not wrong but I say it's more a 60/40

I can see the resemblance but only if I was drunk enough I would think that was a chick

so a normal fan fic with the oc just is watching the plot basically so basically the author is just copying pasting the plot of the show or movie without adding any new nuances of interest a pretty normal fanfic

personally I just wanted to throw my own two cents into this love the story I love the twist on the main character and his persona personally whenever I read a story I think they need to take a note from persona when it comes to character development and this I can say you done perfectly[img=update]

do you know what hen////tai and no I do not mean it's literal transition into English to be clear as far as I am aware the main character does not have a name he's just using the name of someone he ate if it mentioned him having a original name I do not recall

I like the story so far but here's my opinion on his aversion to cyberware he lives in cyberpunk he's going to have to get some modifications done if he wants to survive there are some he can avoid so he cannot or strength mods the armor is a great idea but he wants to go fast he's going to need to get some mods or he's going to die he can't have all of his tech external l or else without it he's going to be very squishy sorry for my word vomit there

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for one I think you should have added comedy to the tags interesting main character but I'm pretty sure he's insane you might want to add a crack warning or maybe that's just the beginning of the story I don't know what you going to do with it later oh well I found that it's a pretty interesting read