Badges 16
Moments 249
The story been going way downhill since the rebellion. So many decisions just didn't make sense. He did everything in the rebellion and wasted away his life just to bend the knee? when he already had the greatest city in the world. This was like the culmination of it all, think the story is unreadable now.
ch 44 Chapter 44: Betrayal
GOT : Reborn as a Frey
Book&Literature · Numera
Man really don't like it when you write about ash and team rocket. All the interactions come through feeling extremely stupid especially the way Ash acts and treats everything. To make it worst, you add in Erika and I just completely question the logic behind alot of the decision. Why run into a potential team rocket base alone? just doesn't make sense. If ash did it alone I could blame his young master syndrome for it... but Erika is part of her league. Why didn't she at least call someone to give a warning or ask for back up?.....
ch 100 Enough with the chit chat
Pokemon: Radical Redux
Anime & Comics · Katsu39
Man what a make let down. Clones of any sorts always ruins a book. To many things and the story tends to spiral out of control. I thought we avoided the whole clones situation, now you randomly give him a Clone power from the op system that could have been anything. What a letdown.
ch 56 Vacation [Vol.1 End]
Celebrity System In The DC Universe
Anime & Comics · Level1Goblin
oh god.... not clones . clones universally kill all novels. things are never the same afterwards.
ch 207 Chapter 207
The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)
Movies · StarWaves
His system is based on karma. There's no reason to stockpile money if he ain't gonna use it. Always a cause and effect. Steal from the evil rich and they will do worse things to get more money or it'll effect the ppl working for them. So unless he becomes a full time vigilante and go after them as well, probably not worth it for the effort and time required to be meaningful for karma.
With Robin, I could steal 1 dollar from every bank account on the planet, or empty out some CEO tax evaders hidden stash without them even knowing it. I just didn't do it because I still have morale.
Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
TV · Alittlepiggy33
You can also notice certain paragraphs repeating itself with the same content, but in different style.
ch 361 Bold Move
Tycoon of Video Games
Video Games · NewComer714
He stated in previous chapters he wanted to fight the main teams.
Nodding in affirmation, Brock then raised his hand to grab something hidden under his shirt, which I could see a chain hanging around his neck that it must've been attached to.
Pokemon: Arceus' Champion
Others · Harry_Dresden
Characterization in the beginnings is pretty bad especially in this chapter. With great intellect comes photographic memory as well as old memories, yet Mc continues to act like, I love my parents, I enjoy these new parents, go to work, never see your son, I completely understand.... yet forgets that they will die soon by canon timeline. That's not how someone who supposedly loves their parents should be acting if you know their gonna die... unless you forgot, yet you remember useless school information? Full of holes in this chapter.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Spider-Man Mayhem
Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3
This. Definitely this. Everything else has been overdone. I want to see what kind of fun insanity you can do with the Worm setting.
Worm: The Lizard Daddy that Replaced Armsmaster
Game of Thrones: Path of the Hungry Bear
Book&Literature · JManM
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Thinking about it also made me curious about writing a song myself in the future. Of course, I didn't think about it as a rule, since it would be easier to make a career with songs from my old world, but it might be fun to make an original song, right?
Gamer Superstar
Fantasy · NunuXD